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Rain...

From a distance she had  
caught his eye as  
he walked toward her  
his blond curls  
being whipped by  
the incoming storm  
his blue eyes gazing steadily  
   
she tried to look away  
but his contemplating  
held her  
   
and then suddenly  
the sky opened  
and as their paths crossed  
he glanced at her  
sideways and said,  
   
"there she stood so  
beautiful in the rain...."
Written by jemac
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