Despondent

A magical write dear Red captivating the reader.. done with you beautiful artistic flare!!! lovely beguiling :) peace Crim

My dearest damsel I thank thee for thy generous complement!:)

Red

majestic wording one of your very best i feel.

great stuff as always

Marcus

Thanks Z so glad that you came by to read this piece!

Red

Wow! A beautiful poem on a beautiful setting...trademark Red:)) love it dear!!

Lol busted out the Shakespearean English for you this time,lol thanks Grace!

Red

I love the Shakespearean English :)))and your writes.

:-)

I just read Hamlet, good ol' Shakespeare's influence has touched us all. I love the amazing fluidity in this piece, Red...like a song! Well done.

I don't write this way very often for the obvious difficulty but there is a innate beauty in the language that speaks to my soul. Thanks SW!!

Red  

Difficult mode to write in. I've always been scared to even try. I have enough trouble writing in my own words...

It is, it really is and I will not say I have mastered it, not in the least but I try and learn along the way. Thanks Petit!

Red

Obvious here that the word usage gives a very classic feel. The first stanza feels as if is leading to something mysterious; while the second sheds a bit of light on the mystery's source.

As usual a delight to read--takes me back to the first poems that made an impression in junior high. Paul Laurence Dunbar's poems were often recited by mom prior to that but I can't say I actively paid attention.

I am so honored that my piece brought back good memories for you Jazz, thank you so much you made my day!

Red

Thou hast done thee Poet well  Milady!!
lol... Truly, this was powerful n deey moving n sadly for me
too much exactly like I feel about that "wanting the attainable" yea I truly commiserate with you my Gypsy!
Exceptional spillage pon the DUP pages

Lol it would not be the first time that we find ourselves on the same wavelength my dear friend, just know I am never too far to be available if you need me. Luv ya Poe. Thanks!

Red

Such Beauty here Dear Red-A Wow of elegance!!!
I am not one of enough knowledge to say right or wrong...this Write is Gorgeous as is...but putting interpretation in...takes away from it (in my humble opinion)...we all speak English...even if it's Ye olde tongue...those who cant understand it...I doubt will ever venture it.

ok tell me to bugger off now ;)

Hahaha thank you so much, you flatter me shamelessly
Soul! I love it though! Muahsss!

Red