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Bloody Hell
Like a specter
perched upon my shoulder
I feel your ghostly presence
haunting me
longing for you
in a way I can't explain
I feel you slowly
slipping away
reaching for you
I grasp thin air
hungrily I search you out
longing for your poetic verse
loneliness wraps
it's arms around me
like a cold blanket
decadently delicious
is your artistic prowess
i'm withering in your absence
bloody hell
time ticking so slow
missing your essence
come back don't fade
into the mist
where arms can't reach
my heart blackened
without your fierce
brawling spirit
now just a ghostly
specter that lingers
in the recesses of my mind
perched upon my shoulder
I feel your ghostly presence
haunting me
longing for you
in a way I can't explain
I feel you slowly
slipping away
reaching for you
I grasp thin air
hungrily I search you out
longing for your poetic verse
loneliness wraps
it's arms around me
like a cold blanket
decadently delicious
is your artistic prowess
i'm withering in your absence
bloody hell
time ticking so slow
missing your essence
come back don't fade
into the mist
where arms can't reach
my heart blackened
without your fierce
brawling spirit
now just a ghostly
specter that lingers
in the recesses of my mind
Published 12th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 5:14pm
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 7:35pm
whew! such a feeling of discovery with each stanza..uncovering loss ever so slowly. tick..tock
flow ink flow....!
love it Crim
~Tom
flow ink flow....!
love it Crim
~Tom
12th Nov 2013 9:12pm
12th Nov 2013 9:27pm
Feels like a cold wind blowing,with a couple of dust balls sweeping by...very empty.
12th Nov 2013 9:34pm
12th Nov 2013 9:40pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 1:37am
Hi Brenda:
every poem you write shows your ever increasing mastery over poetry....you have the talent...and it is showing more every day...
x0
Peace
Kitty
every poem you write shows your ever increasing mastery over poetry....you have the talent...and it is showing more every day...
x0
Peace
Kitty
13th Nov 2013 3:13pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 3:07am
Sometimes I wonder if it's all the same guy - or if they go to the same school to learn all this...
13th Nov 2013 3:14pm
I think they go to the same school lol :) thank you for the visit :) peace Crim
14th Nov 2013 00:32am
I'm sorry Brenda...I didn't comment this or Your other post this day, I hit like ...didn't have time to comment...geesh...made it back now :)
A Beautiful Write...so many we get close to fade away...favorite books, people, music, places...it all seems to fade with time, all we can do is never dwell upon what is missing or gone...only the good that is left or yet to be found.
Wonderful Ink!!!
A Beautiful Write...so many we get close to fade away...favorite books, people, music, places...it all seems to fade with time, all we can do is never dwell upon what is missing or gone...only the good that is left or yet to be found.
Wonderful Ink!!!
14th Nov 2013 3:43pm
no worries I appreciate your visits when you get the chance or are so inclined.. thank you for the insightful comment :) peace Brenda
