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Suicide Hearts {w.BlackVelvetRose}
tried to find you
at the bottom of this bottle
swirling in lust
and the poison of my sins
cigarettes are getting stale
I exhale
& there you are again
swaying in the smoke
money blown
for powder cut on glass
a high to remove your lies
yet this cocaine cries
hundred dollar hookers
fifteen minutes down the drain
your accusing liquid eyes
floating just above the stain
morphine drips
numbing the heart
condemning love
from hardened lips
speeding down a dark road
there ain't nothing left to save
headlights off and gun it
bound for glory. and a grave
at the bottom of this bottle
swirling in lust
and the poison of my sins
cigarettes are getting stale
I exhale
& there you are again
swaying in the smoke
money blown
for powder cut on glass
a high to remove your lies
yet this cocaine cries
hundred dollar hookers
fifteen minutes down the drain
your accusing liquid eyes
floating just above the stain
morphine drips
numbing the heart
condemning love
from hardened lips
speeding down a dark road
there ain't nothing left to save
headlights off and gun it
bound for glory. and a grave
Published 7th Nov 2013
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7th Nov 2013 10:19pm
this is so poisonously seductive one fantastic write it has the allure of danger with a sensual touch.. you both gave it the artist's brush.. love it peace Crim
8th Nov 2013 3:53am
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 4:36am
Terrific collaboration ... hope and futility...
8th Nov 2013 4:55am
9th Nov 2013 7:47am
It's amazing how the cruelty of our addictions become seductive in themselves ... You both have captured that well here ... Bravo!
LSP
LSP
9th Nov 2013 4:10pm
Great collab, you both!
Imaginative and intoxicating write,
speeding into destructiveness.
Imaginative and intoxicating write,
speeding into destructiveness.
10th Nov 2013 11:14pm
Great piece together...some twisting and pulling feelings there,right in my stomach.
20th Nov 2013 2:13am
bound for glory in a haze of criminality
raw and non-stop beat
well done
I think I was your character once or twice, it sounds so familiar
raw and non-stop beat
well done
I think I was your character once or twice, it sounds so familiar
