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Another Walk
Sunlight kisses Autumn leaves
wrapping whipping fall air calls
chilling
to where each footstep crunches under
the howling holler of seasons empty
Blue sky breaks peek through
golden hued stalwarts
tempting the heart, pulling the mind
to that quiet corner
Inn
Holding all the warmth
as lights dance
colour shadows wave
a fire burns remembrance
yesterday tomorrow today
Let fall, pierced and starlight curtain
bring me not, light without Rose ascension
here
where I hear taste and smell
beauty that must be shared, dreaming
Still
it never shares...
only rolls in constant motion
dragging me under,towed along the bottom
deep in this stream of colour
wrapping whipping fall air calls
chilling
to where each footstep crunches under
the howling holler of seasons empty
Blue sky breaks peek through
golden hued stalwarts
tempting the heart, pulling the mind
to that quiet corner
Inn
Holding all the warmth
as lights dance
colour shadows wave
a fire burns remembrance
yesterday tomorrow today
Let fall, pierced and starlight curtain
bring me not, light without Rose ascension
here
where I hear taste and smell
beauty that must be shared, dreaming
Still
it never shares...
only rolls in constant motion
dragging me under,towed along the bottom
deep in this stream of colour
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Re: Another Walk
3rd Nov 2013 10:08pm
I felt the essence of fall just lingering in my presence while reading this...beautiful.
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3rd Nov 2013 10:15pm
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2013 10:30pm
Just beautiful
Thank you for a delightful read
Kitty
Thank you for a delightful read
Kitty
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3rd Nov 2013 10:44pm
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3rd Nov 2013 10:33pm
You so well caught the majesty of the natural world, or at least that part which includes trees. I totally felt like I was walking on the trails down at the park. I would say it is a feeling I get everytime I take a stroll down there but there are some days when I am accompanied by two 4 legged creatures when I am too occupied with keeping up with them to be able to slow down and just enjoy the scene.
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3rd Nov 2013 10:45pm
Indeed those 4 legged hellions will pull You to their adventure not Yours Lol-Thanks Jazz
Re: Another Walk
3rd Nov 2013 10:34pm
when i wanna feel like i don't live in the hood and have to do things i don't wanna do to pay my moms bills. i read a soul poem. it takes me someplace else. no homo. i dig it homes.....
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3rd Nov 2013 10:46pm
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3rd Nov 2013 10:36pm
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3rd Nov 2013 10:51pm
Re: Another Walk
3rd Nov 2013 10:44pm
A beautiful walk surrounded by the glory of nature. Enjoyed the read, Soul, almost felt the atmosphere.
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3rd Nov 2013 10:52pm
Re: Another Walk
4th Nov 2013 00:08am
Here's an old Scotish saying when something is just remarkable .
Soul, " This ink is the dogs bollocks " lol .
It's all gd, just in a silly mood,
KG.
Soul, " This ink is the dogs bollocks " lol .
It's all gd, just in a silly mood,
KG.
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4th Nov 2013 00:44am
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4th Nov 2013 1:46am
I feel my lungs inflate with the onrush of this piece my dear friend....nice poem!
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4th Nov 2013 2:08am
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beauty that must be shared, dreaming
Still
it never shares...
juz says how gentle yet hardcore romantic you are;)
liked the way being dragged along, an endless end to your verses, Soul! nature comes with added liveliness in your writes, loved this majestic piece ~Uma.
Still
it never shares...
juz says how gentle yet hardcore romantic you are;)
liked the way being dragged along, an endless end to your verses, Soul! nature comes with added liveliness in your writes, loved this majestic piece ~Uma.
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4th Nov 2013 2:15pm
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2013 12:50pm
I just love stanza two and four, Soul...
When you write about nature it is like you become part of it...Wonderful walk!!!
When you write about nature it is like you become part of it...Wonderful walk!!!
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4th Nov 2013 2:16pm
...i liked those best as well ;)
Thank You Dear Queen-Your support and Words mean much to me!!!
Thank You Dear Queen-Your support and Words mean much to me!!!
Re: Another Walk
4th Nov 2013 5:00pm
I absolutely love reading your ink, Soul! I'm never disappointed when I visit you. Always amazed at how your ink blows me away....
Beautiful read....Xo
Beautiful read....Xo
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4th Nov 2013 6:43pm
There She is :D
Thank You for stopping by Dear Rain :D
Your support and kind Words always makes me smile!!!
Thank You for stopping by Dear Rain :D
Your support and kind Words always makes me smile!!!
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2013 6:53pm
souladareatease,
And there it is...NOW fall is officially here! Thank you for "dragging me under,towed along the bottom deep in this stream of colour"!!!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
And there it is...NOW fall is officially here! Thank you for "dragging me under,towed along the bottom deep in this stream of colour"!!!
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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4th Nov 2013 11:01pm
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4th Nov 2013 6:56pm
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4th Nov 2013 11:06pm
Re: Another Walk
4th Nov 2013 11:53pm
Was told to check out glad I did. Excellent piece my friend, for your talents are one to behold. Keep them coming!
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5th Nov 2013 00:17am
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5th Nov 2013 00:29am
Lovely,can hear the crunch of the fallen leaves and smell fall in the air :)
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5th Nov 2013 1:48am
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5th Nov 2013 1:00pm
Orange cackle. Yellow strike. These red winds whip my skin, carving to the golden blue beneath my flesh. The cold fires of change crunching like brittle bones beneath my boots. But five days into November '13 & it's already been one of the strangest months I've experienced in some time. It's on days like these when my senses just don't make sense. That's when I need the indefinable power of poetry the most. I am preparing for yet another Autumn hike. I am going to take this piece with me this morning. Thank you for the spell-binding Nature poem, Soul. Heightened senses most divine.
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5th Nov 2013 2:12pm
Man-envious Sir and i thank You-soak it all up Sir like fine wine!!!
it will all make sense once Your out there Sir!!!
it will all make sense once Your out there Sir!!!
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5th Nov 2013 4:47pm
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5th Nov 2013 6:39pm
Re: Another Walk
5th Nov 2013 11:04pm
Fucking hell... I thought you were a painter, turns out your a tattoo artist. Epic write, soul. Really enjoyed reading this.
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6th Nov 2013 1:42am
hahaha now that's definitely TOO kind-really appreciate You dropping by DM!!!
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18th Mar 2021 5:00pm
I have read twice and it's just a beautiful bit of exquisite descriptiveness.
I am lucky to read words that live on... and a beauty that will always be remembered
Ty dear spirits of nature's realm...
xo
I am lucky to read words that live on... and a beauty that will always be remembered
Ty dear spirits of nature's realm...
xo
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