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I feel bereft today
the poets that once graced
these halls gone
leaving only echoes of beauty
and hard hitting nature of their poetic art
I can still feel them in my soul
I refuse to give in letting trolls
poison my mind and cause me to leave in disgust
though I feel drained and saddened
not knowing how to give up
I take a stand
cleanse myself in their memory
mentors, friends, dare I say the love word
cloaked in their poetic verse and spirit
lonely without their presence
i'm depressed but grateful to the ones
that have stuck around
blessing me and many others
each time I see their name on the screen
bringing me up out of the pit of despair
with their giving words and heart
the poets that once graced
these halls gone
leaving only echoes of beauty
and hard hitting nature of their poetic art
I can still feel them in my soul
I refuse to give in letting trolls
poison my mind and cause me to leave in disgust
though I feel drained and saddened
not knowing how to give up
I take a stand
cleanse myself in their memory
mentors, friends, dare I say the love word
cloaked in their poetic verse and spirit
lonely without their presence
i'm depressed but grateful to the ones
that have stuck around
blessing me and many others
each time I see their name on the screen
bringing me up out of the pit of despair
with their giving words and heart
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Re: DU
3rd Nov 2013 2:59am
I'm with you on this, I'm too much of a stubborn fucker to stop doing anything I wanna do. Hemi, Bragg an jack especially were really inspiring for me. Hardly ever received any critique from them but when I did it helped my writing grow in huge leaps, the rest of the time I took what I could from seeing their poems and comps.
I'm just glad I'm not the only stubborn one. Without people like you, Gigi, Atakti, case, rot, Gemini and grace (among others) it would feel like an empty home.
Seeing all these tributes has got me all soppy and shit.
I'm just glad I'm not the only stubborn one. Without people like you, Gigi, Atakti, case, rot, Gemini and grace (among others) it would feel like an empty home.
Seeing all these tributes has got me all soppy and shit.
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3rd Nov 2013 3:14am
i'm with you on this I will miss their example of what a writer should be but love the people who are still here.. peace Crim :)
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3rd Nov 2013 3:02am
beautiful, crim. the admiration & affection you display for other writers of your caliber radiates...
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3rd Nov 2013 3:16am
thank you John I feel many had a deep affection and a deep respect for them.. peace Crim :)
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3rd Nov 2013 3:38pm
No Gg I won't give up I love you and that you're staying touches my heart xoxoxo Crim :)
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3rd Nov 2013 4:18am
Many of us (newbies) have found a refreshing and healing touch in this place and in my case (even thou I've been writing poetry for a long time) I've seen a mentor in many of you guys (crim,souladareatease,gabriel, and many others) but crim you are my #1 poet in this place and your work has inspired me a lot...I know there's a lot of dicks (newbies) that dont know shit about poetry fucking around in here just taking space and harassing ppl like if is fucking facebook...but for the one's that feel poetry we need the "top heads" to stick around... much love crim...
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3rd Nov 2013 3:41pm
Cesar I count you not as a newbie but a friend.. you touched my heart with what you said yes there are many beautiful poets coming and older ones staying making DU blossom anew :) much love Crim
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2013 4:40am
This is what so many of us have been trying to say ... this is still home, for so many of us. It will be a better place again - these things come and go in waves. I have seen it on other sites I belong to. Keep the faith, don't give in, and it will be good again.
Beautifully expressed, love. Thank you.
Beautifully expressed, love. Thank you.

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3rd Nov 2013 3:42pm
Petit thank you for your words of encouragement and truth this is home :) thank you lovely lady.. peace Crim :)
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2013 6:03am
Brenda, It saddens me all this turmoil which is nothing but nuisance in bigger of scheme of things. I hope they will return at some point in the meantime we need to be supportive and patient while the cycle purges itself.
we'll be okay, thank you for speaking out what we've all been feeling and thinking.
we'll be okay, thank you for speaking out what we've all been feeling and thinking.

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3rd Nov 2013 3:44pm
Thank you Vee I hope they return one day as well but in the mean time their are so many beautiful poets like you staying :) peace Crim
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3rd Nov 2013 8:43am
Yes, say the 'love' word, why not?
Love of words, poems, and the respect of the poets pouring their innermost into the ink, then sharing it. Recognition of kindred creative spirits.
That can't be taken from us.
Thank you for the words, and the love.
Love of words, poems, and the respect of the poets pouring their innermost into the ink, then sharing it. Recognition of kindred creative spirits.
That can't be taken from us.
Thank you for the words, and the love.
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3rd Nov 2013 3:45pm
you're right Atakti we can say the love word because it's the soul people pour into their words that we fall in love with.. thank you for being here :) peace Crim
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2013 6:25pm
I feel the same way, well said
good you are still here with us
nicely worded, peace :-)
good you are still here with us
nicely worded, peace :-)

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5th Nov 2013 11:03am
I respect others decisions,but I think it's stupid to let others idiocy control your life habits.I come here plenty.However I just stick to reading poetry mostly.Rarely read anything on the forums.Forums are always full of trolls.It's a fact of life.
I don't have to deal with the same issues as some women though.So there I can possibly see.I think I'd still be stubborn...
Enjoyed...
I don't have to deal with the same issues as some women though.So there I can possibly see.I think I'd still be stubborn...
Enjoyed...
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