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hey
I drink liquid sunshine from you...
lost in ages
steaming sensation of lust
the clock goes to fast
time is distance in my soul.
lost in ages
steaming sensation of lust
the clock goes to fast
time is distance in my soul.
Published 31st Oct 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 31st Oct 2013 9:57pm
31st Oct 2013 9:56pm
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31st Oct 2013 10:42pm
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1st Nov 2013 00:16am
31st Oct 2013 11:52pm
1st Nov 2013 00:18am
well i wont deny that sometimes my mind works better with a little wine...lol thank you so much crim is always nice to have you around... :)peace cesar
1st Nov 2013 11:22am
I love dark themes yet I am a Sun addict. I would very much appreciate it in liquid form for the winter doldrums. Time flies when you're having fun, so goes the old cliché. Steamy spiritual piece, Cesar.
1st Nov 2013 1:02pm
thank you for passing by butcher...your time and comment is well appreciated thank you
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 2:39am
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7th Nov 2013 9:43pm
7th Nov 2013 9:08pm
I very much like the first line, and the last.
Dare I suggest you reconsider the title? This poem deserves... more.
:)
Dare I suggest you reconsider the title? This poem deserves... more.
:)
7th Nov 2013 9:42pm
THANK YOU!!! and you know i thought about the title a while ago...but i can't think of anything that would fit right. once again thx for your kind comment,its an honor!
18th Nov 2013 8:21pm
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