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Wilted Flowers
sober writing
hurts
I feel
raw
cold, empty
nothing
to say
smoking
savoring the
moment
I write
cigarettes
litter the ground
what's to be
said
that I haven't
already
uttered in regret
i'm shivering
cold
my fire
put out
damn I need
a drink
to free
the wanton
one
she's here
trembling
your quiet
undertones
a current
that
carry me away
like wilted
flowers
cast in the sea
washing
upon your shore
if you find
my loneliness
wrapped
in sadness
send it back
return
to sender
hurts
I feel
raw
cold, empty
nothing
to say
smoking
savoring the
moment
I write
cigarettes
litter the ground
what's to be
said
that I haven't
already
uttered in regret
i'm shivering
cold
my fire
put out
damn I need
a drink
to free
the wanton
one
she's here
trembling
your quiet
undertones
a current
that
carry me away
like wilted
flowers
cast in the sea
washing
upon your shore
if you find
my loneliness
wrapped
in sadness
send it back
return
to sender
Published 31st Oct 2013
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31st Oct 2013 7:41am
Ooh... :) beautiful in a slightly haunting way... Captivating read as always Crim!
31st Oct 2013 7:45am
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31st Oct 2013 3:35pm
Indeed Beautiful Hauntings here Dear Crim-Never change who You are -except what You want Dear Poetess!!!
31st Oct 2013 3:45pm
1st Nov 2013 7:11am
1st Nov 2013 5:17pm
thank you Mia you made me smile though this was a sad write of mine :) peace Brenda
1st Nov 2013 8:50pm
What's to be said that I haven't uttered in regret already
I hate writing sober now too crim, I can't find my honesty without lube anymore (it's not the only thing I can't find hehe)
I hate writing sober now too crim, I can't find my honesty without lube anymore (it's not the only thing I can't find hehe)
1st Nov 2013 9:02pm
you make me laugh with your witty comments :) i'm lubing myself right now lol thank you for the comment and add.. peace Crim
