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Cunt Bitch
Burn my tender flesh
with that Marlboro you're smoking
let me feel the pain
that I've earned
withholding from you
like the slut I am
I had no right to
stoke the fires
then put them out
burning with desire
i'm a wanton whore
in need of a good beating
a masochist at heart
I don't feel the love
if it doesn't hurt
teasing you
fuck what a bitch
I am
in need of your sadistic touch
cruelly withhold
the whip my ass so deserves
instant gratification
withheld I got the message
just another cunt
pussy ablaze
with no pain
to put it out
with that Marlboro you're smoking
let me feel the pain
that I've earned
withholding from you
like the slut I am
I had no right to
stoke the fires
then put them out
burning with desire
i'm a wanton whore
in need of a good beating
a masochist at heart
I don't feel the love
if it doesn't hurt
teasing you
fuck what a bitch
I am
in need of your sadistic touch
cruelly withhold
the whip my ass so deserves
instant gratification
withheld I got the message
just another cunt
pussy ablaze
with no pain
to put it out
Published 24th Oct 2013
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24th Oct 2013 3:54pm
sometimes a cigar is just a cigar... sometimes it's foreplay ;-)
loved this Brenda.
loved this Brenda.
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24th Oct 2013 8:57pm
very arousing...in all the ways!
"i'm a wanton whore
in need of a good beating "
crude writing. LOVE IT !!!
"i'm a wanton whore
in need of a good beating "
crude writing. LOVE IT !!!
25th Oct 2013 4:39pm
24th Oct 2013 9:04pm
You are amazing it would be awesome to have some of your work portrayed by actors and actresses
Bravo!
Fire
Bravo!
Fire
25th Oct 2013 4:41pm
thank you Fire great idea :) I don't know who would play me though lol.. thank you for such a heartfelt comment.. peace Brenda
24th Oct 2013 9:49pm
25th Oct 2013 4:42pm
Thank you Atakti for such a lovely comment.. yeah one of those days lol.. peace Crim
24th Oct 2013 11:29pm
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24th Oct 2013 11:44pm
Oh my god i love you .. lol YES!!!!!1 I just logged in to see if i could be stimulated. that is what the fuck i'm talking about thank you baby. oh yes this did it for me. i'm gonna read it to everyone that i see.
25th Oct 2013 4:44pm
I love you too my dark and beautiful Mistress.. i'm so touched that you loved this write.. made my week thank you :) peace Crim
Anonymous
25th Oct 2013 1:46am
Definitely well written. Grabs and doesn't let go...
25th Oct 2013 4:45pm
My dearly beloved
masochistic whore
I've got your Marlboro
right here
cunt bitch
I'll slap you
spank you
and fuck you
with my poetic
fire within
branding you
as mine
with a Marlboro
between my lips
Sorry, my sadistic side came roaring out after reading that one! Thought you might like that. Don't take it seriously though, Brenda. I have all the respect in the world for ya, my friend. Loved the poem. Inspirational, as you saw. :) Rock on Sinful Criminal!
Gemini
masochistic whore
I've got your Marlboro
right here
cunt bitch
I'll slap you
spank you
and fuck you
with my poetic
fire within
branding you
as mine
with a Marlboro
between my lips
Sorry, my sadistic side came roaring out after reading that one! Thought you might like that. Don't take it seriously though, Brenda. I have all the respect in the world for ya, my friend. Loved the poem. Inspirational, as you saw. :) Rock on Sinful Criminal!
Gemini
25th Oct 2013 4:48pm
I loved your reply Gemini blew me away seeing your sadistic side.. you have a poem there sizzling.. lighting a fire in my masochistic side turning me on.. loved it!!! my friend.. peace Brenda :)
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2013 3:27pm
mmmm!! yes bitch, I'm awake and I know but you'll stay chained to the foot of my bed until I feel the need
Wonderfully seething need Crim..I'm a fan :)
Wonderfully seething need Crim..I'm a fan :)
7th Nov 2013 7:10pm
Loved your reply delicious ;) thank you i'll stay where i'm chained ;) peace Crim
