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The Dark Heart of Night II
Beast, in my dreams you come
and overtake any and all of my will,
you fill me with yearnings
that cannot possibly fulfilled.
Demon lover, how much passion can I give
and how much will you take?
How much is enough for you to live
or so much for me that I finally break.
You extricate every nuance of desire
and unbridled emotion that castigate,
then you mix it with lethal doses of ire
creating a loathsome passion I love to hate.
Cloaked in indigo darkness you come, fire and ice,
brutal yet seductive you take my warmth, the joy in my life;
you leave me barren, devoid of all happiness
struggling, just to survive.
My beast, my demon lover, truly my dark heart of night...
Gypsy Red
Written by
marielavoue
(Gypsy Red)
Published 19th Oct 2013
| Edited 20th Oct 2013
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Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 2:21am
Gypsy you never fail to amaze your demon lover has cast a spell.. dark and sensual.. love it!!! peace Crim
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re: Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 2:25am
Thank you so sweetness I've been tied in so much stuff, but I had drop something off for guys!
Peace
Red
Peace
Red
Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 2:34am
Riveting Dear Red!!!
Much Missed...glad Your Back with this Wicked Write!!!
Much Missed...glad Your Back with this Wicked Write!!!
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re: Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 2:49am
Thank you my most gallant Soul! I am trying to get done so I can get back to you guys, missing you too!
Red
Red
Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 2:39am
So dark and romantic. Great imagery and tone here. Well done.
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re: Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 2:51am
Thanks SW its my favorite combination, it lends itself to many outcomes :-) thank you much for reading!
Red
Red
Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 3:02am
Shivers and heat - loving this...
Must go find The Dark Heart of Night I
Must go find The Dark Heart of Night I
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re: Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 3:36pm
Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 4:54am
She's baaaaaccckkk with another sizzler!
yea, the verse matches the pic. Well n I must say, what a nice ass pic. It is too lol excellent inking of course! :)
yea, the verse matches the pic. Well n I must say, what a nice ass pic. It is too lol excellent inking of course! :)
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re: Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 3:39pm
I'm coming/cuming fo ya baby!!!) Lolol Yeah I aint neva gone too long lolol DU is my vise! Thanks boo!
Red
Red
Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
Interesting that rather then suggesting a demon who cultivates what is already there you depicted him as bringing with him ingredients of the "yearnings".
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re: Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
20th Oct 2013 00:41am
Sometimes we don't know we yearn for something till we are made to realize it, we accept mediocrity and never venture outside the box. Lol deep thoughts lol
Thanks Jazz.
Red
Thanks Jazz.
Red
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20th Oct 2013 4:25am
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Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 6:23am
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19th Oct 2013 3:42pm
My dearest Grace I am glad to be back, I see you've kept the candle in the window for the ones who got lost in the storm, thank you!
Red
Red
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19th Oct 2013 11:52pm
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Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 3:21pm
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19th Oct 2013 3:45pm
MY SISTER FROM ANOTHER MISSES AND MISTER!!!WOO WOO!
Now its a party! Thank you Magda nice to see you too!:-)
Red
Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
19th Oct 2013 8:46pm
Red, Red, Red! Girl, your pen is Wicked! I'm never disappointed when I visit your ink. This was another one that hit my list of goodies! Xo Pen love~
Miss ya! Xo
Miss ya! Xo
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re: Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
20th Oct 2013 00:08am
Thank you for EVERYTHING you were also another ray of light in my darkness!!!
Red
Red
Re: The Dark Heart of Night II
21st Oct 2013 12:47pm
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21st Oct 2013 7:48pm
Thanks H man! Blow baby blow watch out now its hot lol thanks for stopping by! :-)
Red
Red
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21st Oct 2013 6:46pm
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21st Oct 2013 7:49pm
And you know this! Lolol I am always going to be naughty/nice lol thanks Marcus!:-)
Red
Red
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24th Oct 2013 3:24pm
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