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why
why do we sleep at night knowing we might die
why are we happy when we know we die in the end
why do we live if we have nothing to live for
why do we tell ourselves it will get better when we know it dosnt
why do we jump if we know we get hurt
why do we think everything is fine when its not
why do we fall for people when we get crushed
why are we trying to feel better when we know we cant
why do we live if we know die in the end
why do we do everything that we do
why are we happy when we know we die in the end
why do we live if we have nothing to live for
why do we tell ourselves it will get better when we know it dosnt
why do we jump if we know we get hurt
why do we think everything is fine when its not
why do we fall for people when we get crushed
why are we trying to feel better when we know we cant
why do we live if we know die in the end
why do we do everything that we do
Published 10th Oct 2013
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10th Oct 2013 6:17pm
brilliant write, questions a lot of people probably ask themselves often.
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10th Oct 2013 7:16pm
11th Oct 2013 11:12am
This is nice. I ask these questions to myself all the time and wonder how people conceal their challenges with optimism.
14th Oct 2013 4:25pm
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14th Oct 2013 5:36pm
You posed good questions in your first poem on DUP...food for thought. That being said...please write on!
Welcome to DUP, New Member
enjoy!
Kitty
Welcome to DUP, New Member
enjoy!
Kitty
17th Oct 2013 5:03pm
Love the way you think. Great way to kick off your time here! Welcome to DUP!
6th Nov 2013 1:24am
Love this so much... Welcome to DUP by the way, can't wait to read your other poems!
12th Feb 2014 7:22pm
Very good questions. I wish i had answers for myself everyones would be personal i would think. Anyway great read
13th Feb 2014 3:53pm
13th Feb 2014 4:04am
the reason we do what we do is becuse we have to we know that if we jump we get hurt we fall in love we get hurt we know we will all die in the end but we still try to live and the reason why that is is becuse we are only human like plants and animals we have instins in us too we have to sleep we have to eat we have to live even when we dont want to becuse our minds and body tell us too its like sticking your face underwater after a while you lose your breath and your body forces you to come up for air . anyway i truly love this poem is amazing keep wrighting :)
13th Feb 2014 3:46pm
16th Feb 2014 12:40pm
Questions make good poems. It keeps the reader interested and at the same time asks himself or herself for the answers to the questions they read. Good write. Keep it up.
24th Feb 2024 8:07pm
It’s a steam of consciousness piece that asks valid questions when reflecting and pondering on life’s decisions.
Well done
Well done
