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We sink with the rise
Marionettes pulled by rays
Bow in honeyed light
Presented in the Nature challenge hosted by Primrose
We sink with the rise
Marionettes pulled by rays
Bow in honeyed light
Presented in the Nature challenge hosted by Primrose
Published 10th Oct 2013
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10th Oct 2013 11:39pm
11th Oct 2013 3:58am
11th Oct 2013 6:18am
Somewhere beyond beautiful..."sink with the rise"...nice, very, very nice. Gorgeous haiku.
11th Oct 2013 10:52am
Thanks for the confirmation and Reading List add ... It's always cool when someone acknowledges the effort.
LSP
LSP
24th Oct 2013 5:47am
