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His Words of RELIEF
I read his words
The words he sent
Me from so far away
And they sunk in
I breathed a great sigh
Of RELIEF
Closed my eyes and
Found that part of me
The words he sent
Me from so far away
And they sunk in
I breathed a great sigh
Of RELIEF
Closed my eyes and
Found that part of me
Published 10th Oct 2013
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10th Oct 2013 3:52am
You stole my thoughts. Lol in other words I can relate to this... Very recently in fact.
Love this:)
Love this:)
10th Oct 2013 4:25am
an. beautiful write.. u created every good image with just those few lines... keep up the good work..
cyanide
cyanide
Anonymous
10th Oct 2013 4:38am
Tommie this is beautiful...I am so glad you are in touch with such inner peace :)
10th Oct 2013 5:03am
words in a letter or on a computer screen. technology can deliver those words in so many ways, but the romance in your poem is from long ago & forever...
10th Oct 2013 3:22pm
Anonymous
10th Oct 2013 5:06pm
Tommie,
We all need that little bit of relief every now and then; you served it well! Enjoyed!
tornado
We all need that little bit of relief every now and then; you served it well! Enjoyed!
tornado
11th Oct 2013 4:58am
Sometimes that's all it takes is that comfort in hearing from
someone... This feels deeper than what it seems
someone... This feels deeper than what it seems
