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Do you realize.....
Do you realize
almost anything you do
can get me really aroused
and soaking wet
in a manner of seconds flat
whether it's hearing your voice
or just picturing you and I together
or reading one of your love poems
or anything written by you at all
do you have any idea how much
I want you and how I fantasize
about us fucking and making love
in every conceivable position
both of us dripping moaning
and cumming all night long over and over again
do you have any idea at all
how much I love you?
damn it I wish we could just fuck
and make love 24/7
Do u realize at all.........?
almost anything you do
can get me really aroused
and soaking wet
in a manner of seconds flat
whether it's hearing your voice
or just picturing you and I together
or reading one of your love poems
or anything written by you at all
do you have any idea how much
I want you and how I fantasize
about us fucking and making love
in every conceivable position
both of us dripping moaning
and cumming all night long over and over again
do you have any idea at all
how much I love you?
damn it I wish we could just fuck
and make love 24/7
Do u realize at all.........?
Published 8th Oct 2013
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8th Oct 2013 3:49am
Oh my god! No I didn't but shit I'm down!
Lmao jk... Lucky hug that is... He better recognize!
A very steamy ink my friend! :)
Lmao jk... Lucky hug that is... He better recognize!
A very steamy ink my friend! :)
8th Oct 2013 5:13am
I take it you like my steamy little poem then....
Forgive my ignorance but what is Lmao jk? :)
Forgive my ignorance but what is Lmao jk? :)
8th Oct 2013 12:29pm
8th Oct 2013 4:56pm
Yeah I can guess what you r thinking but I would love to hear it anyway......... ;)
8th Oct 2013 8:49am
Amazing..had me turned on full..and wanting to be your man..beautifully scribed with a real passion. phew!! hot stuff.. please can I have more Miss?
8th Oct 2013 4:50pm
Turned on fully and wanting to b my man........
well I am really glad that my erotic poem did what erotic poems are supposed to do........ :)
well I am really glad that my erotic poem did what erotic poems are supposed to do........ :)
8th Oct 2013 4:53pm
And yes you can have more -- how can I refuse when you
are asking so nicely.......
are asking so nicely.......
30th Aug 2017 8:13pm
8th Oct 2013 4:20pm
Wow. I hope he realizes how you feel. Very erotic and to the point, I love it. Good job.
8th Oct 2013 4:52pm
Sometimes I worry that I am too direct, so I am glad you found it erotic despite my straightforwardness. ;)
9th Oct 2013 5:52pm
What amazing poem, very direct and well write, too. Very nice! Hope for you he read it, lucky man!
9th Oct 2013 6:05pm
I have a feeling he read it and I hope fervently he knows what I am trying to tell him......
I just had an epiphany that in fact even with my direct style there is a more indirect message imparted in this poem that is not so obvious.....
I think he knows me well enough to know what it is....?
I just had an epiphany that in fact even with my direct style there is a more indirect message imparted in this poem that is not so obvious.....
I think he knows me well enough to know what it is....?
9th Oct 2013 6:12pm
Poesy is a marvellous mean to impart messages... And direct or indirect, evident or hidden... And your style is amazing, but I am sure, efficient!
10th Oct 2013 1:06am
Thank u. Coming from u it seems having been told I have an efficient style is a compliment to be cherished.....
24th Oct 2013 6:06pm
Dang it! That was smothering hot, yet full of passion and love...
Enjoyed this ink, Scarlet! Xo
Pen Hug~
Enjoyed this ink, Scarlet! Xo
Pen Hug~
8th Nov 2013 6:37am
Glad you enjoyed it and thought is smothering hot and full of passion and love....
I guess I hit the mark with this one.....
Lots of love.... :)
I guess I hit the mark with this one.....
Lots of love.... :)
15th Nov 2013 10:08pm
What you have done here is characterize a state in which everyone wishes they could have with their significant other. As such it is one of the writes which goes beyond just "erotic", in my view.
So nicely done!
So nicely done!
16th Nov 2013 8:40pm
Only one person has ever been able to bring out that kind of state in me.....
I have often wondered why that is the case --
perhaps my desire and love for this person was encoded into my dna somehow .... he he :)
I have often wondered why that is the case --
perhaps my desire and love for this person was encoded into my dna somehow .... he he :)
Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 5:12am
So! Who could ever resist this offer. Hope he's on the next plane. LOL!!!!! Enjoyed this very sexy write! :)
19th Nov 2013 8:39pm
Thank you FG. Always love you and your feedback....
He and I can be so hot together for sure..... :)
He and I can be so hot together for sure..... :)
1st Dec 2013 1:41am
6th Dec 2013 7:04pm
He brings out those feelings in me and around him I just can't help myself but wanting to go at it around the clock....
Thank you for your sweet comment...
Thank you for your sweet comment...
Anonymous
5th Dec 2013 10:07pm
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6th Dec 2013 7:08pm
It 's pretty romantic and steamy between he and I and amazingly those feelings have never gone away even though I have known him for over thirty years of my life....
Thank you for commenting on my poem ...... :)
Thank you for commenting on my poem ...... :)
Anonymous
6th Dec 2013 7:24pm
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7th Dec 2013 8:16am
I know he cares for me too -- but he always works on many projects and waits for timing to be right which is a good thing... but I miss him so tell him to text or call me sometime
..... just kidding -- I know you don't know him.....
Thank you for your kind and wonderful remark..... :)
..... just kidding -- I know you don't know him.....
Thank you for your kind and wonderful remark..... :)
7th Dec 2013 8:24am
7th Dec 2013 7:32pm
Thank for commenting -- this poem is one of my favorite and I get enjoyment everytime I read it myself.......
14th Dec 2013 2:26pm
16th Dec 2013 9:31pm
I am glad my poem pleased you do much.....
24/7.......... sigh......dream...... ;)
24/7.......... sigh......dream...... ;)
19th Dec 2013 6:15am
D initial stanza is grt start nd rest took d pace…ya anything u do… can get me really aroused
and soaking wet ...ya can be realized...
and soaking wet ...ya can be realized...
Anonymous
6th Jan 2014 5:59pm
This poem is hot because of the power you convey through it. The fact that you can get "soaking wet" at all the little things in the poem and then ending it with your fantasies really just screams passion. Just reading this had a physical effect on me, very steamy!
7th Jan 2014 1:49am
I am really glad it had such a steamy effect on you -- I just re-read it and I have to say I quite like it myself because it manages to capture exactly how I feel about a certain someone...... :)
20th Jan 2014 6:39am
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