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You are the Rain
Like a wilting rose,
thirsting for water
I am weak and fragile
ready to fall,
ready to break.
Spreading my roots
further and further,
thinner and thinner,
smaller and smaller
bending in the wind.
Ready to surrender,
ready to die.
Like a fresh spring rain...
you came
soft and warm
caressing me,covering me.
Flooding my veins with life
standing me straight
giving me strength,
filling me with you...
Let it rain.
thirsting for water
I am weak and fragile
ready to fall,
ready to break.
Spreading my roots
further and further,
thinner and thinner,
smaller and smaller
bending in the wind.
Ready to surrender,
ready to die.
Like a fresh spring rain...
you came
soft and warm
caressing me,covering me.
Flooding my veins with life
standing me straight
giving me strength,
filling me with you...
Let it rain.
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2nd Oct 2013 10:24pm
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Re: You are the Rain
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2013 10:49pm
Beautiful tribute. Hope she has seen it.
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3rd Oct 2013 00:13am
Re: You are the Rain
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2013 00:13am
So beautiful with such simplicity you're saying so much in here, yes let it rain and you rained magnificently !
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3rd Oct 2013 00:15am
Re: You are the Rain
3rd Oct 2013 00:24am
Soo tender...touching....
Like the gentle rain, this piece falls softly upon the soul.
Mo Cara, such sweetly scribed serenity!
Like the gentle rain, this piece falls softly upon the soul.
Mo Cara, such sweetly scribed serenity!
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re: Re: You are the Rain
3rd Oct 2013 00:38am
Re: You are the Rain
3rd Oct 2013 00:49am
This holds a depth n serenity that warms the soul!
Outstanding ink bro! :)
Outstanding ink bro! :)
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3rd Oct 2013 1:36am
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