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A 'Quickie...'
Mouthwatering images
dribble
for desires' quench
though moments
of lip scrimmages
only added
to hunger's stench
whilst a wet tongue utters
a word that
enflames passion
rapid heart,
beats a stutter
as pouring her
into him
is now in fashion
wearing
unyielding intent
they simultaneously
'want' reward
at the same
time it's spent
and I, becomes
a water'shed'
moment
of their own accord
dribble
for desires' quench
though moments
of lip scrimmages
only added
to hunger's stench
whilst a wet tongue utters
a word that
enflames passion
rapid heart,
beats a stutter
as pouring her
into him
is now in fashion
wearing
unyielding intent
they simultaneously
'want' reward
at the same
time it's spent
and I, becomes
a water'shed'
moment
of their own accord
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Re: A 'Quickie...'
27th Sep 2013 11:36am
Uh ... an intense quicky it is! Full of mouthwatering images! You made my day!
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re: Re: A 'Quickie...'
28th Sep 2013 00:26am
Re: A 'Quickie...'
27th Sep 2013 12:05pm
Just sheerly delightful. Nothing soothes the soul than feeling you leapt off the hamster wheel for a while and cherished stolen moments. Lovely. Syn
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28th Sep 2013 00:26am
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27th Sep 2013 1:37pm
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28th Sep 2013 00:28am
Re: A 'Quickie...'
27th Sep 2013 7:00pm
Know that's a quickie done with sheer brilliance of words that captures you from the start. A salute to you for displaying great ink.
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re: Re: A 'Quickie...'
28th Sep 2013 00:30am
Bro. I'm so honored that you have given me ur support, truly appreciate it n you! :)
re: Re: A 'Quickie...'
28th Sep 2013 00:31am
Well I like knowing you found it sexy
N I'm flattered too... :) muah! Thanks sweetie
N I'm flattered too... :) muah! Thanks sweetie
Re: A 'Quickie...'
27th Sep 2013 11:40pm
re: Re: A 'Quickie...'
28th Sep 2013 00:34am
Lmao, "Cunning-Lingquist?" My friend YOU are pretty darn clever yourself! lol thanks a bunch bro.*he says as he walks away trying to subtlely wipe the excess honey from his mouth*
Lmao
Lmao
Re: A 'Quickie...'
Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 1:30am
ooh everyone's down for a quickie lol
fabulously delish ride, and thats how mr. PIKM rolls :))
fabulously delish ride, and thats how mr. PIKM rolls :))
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re: Re: A 'Quickie...'
2nd Oct 2013 3:45am
Oh heck yea becuz sometimes u just gotta get what u can get when it. CUMS up lol thanks my sweetie pie! :)
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1st Oct 2013 9:20pm
re: Re: A 'Quickie...'
2nd Oct 2013 3:44am
Lol so I'm guessing u had a chance of heart!? lol
Thank u my sweetness, I truly appreciate you :)
Thank u my sweetness, I truly appreciate you :)
Re: A 'Quickie...'
1st Oct 2013 9:25pm
This poem set my mind racing with what you could with such a tongue.. masterful crafting of words.. :) peace Crim
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re: Re: A 'Quickie...'
2nd Oct 2013 3:48am
Oh hell yea! lol word up I'm a very serious 'head artist' lol
thanks my friend, appreciate ur support always :)
thanks my friend, appreciate ur support always :)