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Playtime
Thoughts of you racing around I barely having time to shower
Before your calling me back to play alone with you, a rare treat
But when allowed to take the plunge
I do
Over the edge
Into the deep
Holding my breath
With you
Racing
Before your calling me back to play alone with you, a rare treat
But when allowed to take the plunge
I do
Over the edge
Into the deep
Holding my breath
With you
Racing
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Re: Playtime
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 8:14am
don't forget to breathe... love the urgency in this!
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Re: Playtime
26th Sep 2013 8:17am
My breath escapes me everytime I take that solo dive :)
Thankyou petit for great advice **Breathing now
Thankyou petit for great advice **Breathing now
Re: Playtime
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 9:18am
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Re: Playtime
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 3:08pm
LIve the moment, breathe in, enjoy..we need to remember to do this often..Thanks Rose
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re: Re: Playtime
26th Sep 2013 3:20pm
Agreed Vee
Past is gone
Future not written
Live the Now..that's why I've now got my feet up on the sofa
Just need a naked man now to wait on my every need but will settle for the tv
:)
Past is gone
Future not written
Live the Now..that's why I've now got my feet up on the sofa
Just need a naked man now to wait on my every need but will settle for the tv
:)
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Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 3:22pm
dont forget the hairy chest hehe
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26th Sep 2013 3:28pm
God yes!
272..
273..
274....
DANG
Oh well
1.
2..
3...
Was never that good at counting hehe
272..
273..
274....
DANG
Oh well
1.
2..
3...
Was never that good at counting hehe
Re: Playtime
26th Sep 2013 9:42pm
Lovely poem. Very touching: "with you Racing."
I hope she is racing toward you.
marcella1
I hope she is racing toward you.
marcella1
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re: Re: Playtime
27th Sep 2013 5:22am
Re: Playtime
27th Sep 2013 00:05am
one of my two
chest hairs has gone..!
I guess now you'll
never drop in..:)
lovely poem...
chest hairs has gone..!
I guess now you'll
never drop in..:)
lovely poem...
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re: Re: Playtime
27th Sep 2013 5:21am