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I See You...
Do you have
a mansion at the top ?
Your ride to work
all downhill.
Do you coast everywhere you go
no red lights,only green.
Do you even see me
standing there
at the bottom of the hill,
my hands rough and cracked
my face wrinkled and worn
holes in my pants
same coat every day,
waiting for the light to change
so I can cross...
to the other side.
Do you look over and notice
what's outside
or is your world
the only world ?
a mansion at the top ?
Your ride to work
all downhill.
Do you coast everywhere you go
no red lights,only green.
Do you even see me
standing there
at the bottom of the hill,
my hands rough and cracked
my face wrinkled and worn
holes in my pants
same coat every day,
waiting for the light to change
so I can cross...
to the other side.
Do you look over and notice
what's outside
or is your world
the only world ?
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Re: I See You...
23rd Sep 2013 00:47am
There is a saying 'in contemplating the skies, don't forget the grass under your feet'. Good read Hashman.
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23rd Sep 2013 1:39am
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2013 2:11am
Mr. Hash, powerfully wise statement this piece makes. Excellent scribe!
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23rd Sep 2013 2:44am
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2013 5:40am
Blinkered vision is all too common. Good stuff here, hon!
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23rd Sep 2013 12:47pm
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Re: I See You...
23rd Sep 2013 11:49pm
I notice everything and everyone. My world is all that is around me!
This was full of thought, hash! Something to ponder over! Very well scribed! Xo
This was full of thought, hash! Something to ponder over! Very well scribed! Xo
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24th Sep 2013 1:21am
Re: I See You...
24th Sep 2013 2:16am
Reminds me of the quote “I wonder how many people I've looked at all my life and never seen.”
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24th Sep 2013 2:26am
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16th Dec 2013 2:09pm
Re: I See You...
16th Dec 2013 2:51pm
Whoa bro. This was deep as hell for me becuz it took me back to my youth... Nearly every female I ever liked
Made me feel this way... Like everything in their life
was ALL n I was invisible, still happens to this day.
Exceptional ink!
Made me feel this way... Like everything in their life
was ALL n I was invisible, still happens to this day.
Exceptional ink!
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16th Dec 2013 10:40pm