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unspoken words
I've been carrying this around
with me for too long
It weighs heavily on
my weak heart
I want to tell you what it is, but
I don't want you to feel uncomfortable
I was hoping that you would
hear it from someone else though
But I'm just going to come
out with it
(Deep breath)
You've got a booger in your nose
with me for too long
It weighs heavily on
my weak heart
I want to tell you what it is, but
I don't want you to feel uncomfortable
I was hoping that you would
hear it from someone else though
But I'm just going to come
out with it
(Deep breath)
You've got a booger in your nose
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Re: unspoken words
Anonymous
18th Sep 2013 6:53pm
hahahaaaaaaa love it!!!! you're the cutest thing ever!!! hugzzz
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Re: unspoken words
18th Sep 2013 6:56pm
Okay, I seriously "lol'd" at this and now need to clean really good wine off my pc screen.
So damn cute Cinth and uber clever!!
So damn cute Cinth and uber clever!!
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18th Sep 2013 7:52pm
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18th Sep 2013 7:00pm
I'm so glad you mentioned that, and only a real friend would. You see, true story, when I was 12 I was having severe nose bleeds and in an effort to help me, my mother took me to the doctor to see what he could do. He saw that my nose was mal-formed and so he took acid and put it in with a dropper, but it just went down my windpipe and burned my tongue and I lost most of my ability to taste. Then he took a hot iron, like you soldier with, and he put a flat nib on it and burned the entire inside of my nose so that I lost feeling and the majority of my ability to smell anything. Of all the things in the world, the surgery as it was was unsuccessful and at the least thing my nose bleeds all over, and I can't even blow my nose without its bleeding for an hour. I can hardly tell when I have a booger because of the feeling's being gone, so thanks for letting me know. It was not all bad though, because I was left with the ability to smell human hormones of all things, and whenever a woman is ovulating or on her period I can smell it as clear as day.
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18th Sep 2013 7:57pm
I too suffer from hectic nosebleeds (even had one earlier on today) and my mom encouraged me to undergo that surgical procedure and I refused. Now I have a story to back myself up with so thank you for sharing that with me,Chris (:
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18th Sep 2013 7:02pm
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18th Sep 2013 7:03pm
L o l. My oh my. I enjoyed the laugh and all kinds of weird chuckles erupted from my throat, Cinth :'D
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18th Sep 2013 7:29pm
LMFAO!!! Wow! Lol that was sick n seriously fucking funny as hell! lol exceptional ink my dear friend! Love to see your humor explode in ink :)
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19th Sep 2013 5:18am
:D Thank you for taking the the time to read me and to comment (: I'm glad you enjoyed it
Re: unspoken words
20th Sep 2013 4:31pm
I just had this conversation this morning!!
Glad I'm not the only one. I almost felt bad.
Funny write
Glad I'm not the only one. I almost felt bad.
Funny write
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re: Re: unspoken words
21st Sep 2013 2:28am
Haha,and it's the most awkward thing to tell a person.
Thank you for taking the time to read me,Mind Unleashed (:
Thank you for taking the time to read me,Mind Unleashed (:
Re: unspoken words
21st Sep 2013 5:47pm
HA...that was great...the way you drew me in had me all soft and ready for something big...ha,thanks your good :)
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22nd Sep 2013 00:30am