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pussy as the promised land
I've been to the promised land
it's a warm embrace
and between the legs of a teenage girl
get fucked, little girl
because that's all you can do
I'll be the one on top
composing my sonnet
force feeding you my dictation of unholy movement
it's a warm embrace
and between the legs of a teenage girl
get fucked, little girl
because that's all you can do
I'll be the one on top
composing my sonnet
force feeding you my dictation of unholy movement
Published 4th Jan 2011
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2011 4:09am
The last line is the best, though it didn't quite make sense at first. I rarely see you write in stanzas, so that was a refreshing change. Gotta shake up the system haha.
4th Jan 2011 4:11am
nothing makes sense everything is absurd and abstract these lines of symbols that you are now "reading" is just a silly game cave men made up to pass the time when not hunting or sleeping or sticking our guns in the "right" hole
4th Jan 2011 9:03pm
5th Jan 2011 4:52am
4th Jan 2011 9:08pm
I love how you've put 'composing my sonnet' just before 'force feeding you..' It's like romance with a hard edge...I love that last verse. <3
5th Jan 2011 4:58am
that hard edge with just a hint of give is the sculpture i constantly strive to carve into these sentences that I pour from me <3
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4th Jan 2011 9:52pm
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