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If I looked

Would you look away
If I looked deep into your eyes.

No.

Thank you.

Written by Lookawaynow

(Rose)

Published 10th Sep 2013

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Re: If I looked

10th Sep 2013 2:56pm

I like this, I hope
you've put the
answer to the test..:)
Nicely written...

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Re: If I looked

10th Sep 2013 3:01pm

Not yet i haven't but the day is young

ty for commenting xD

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Re: If I looked

11th Sep 2013 1:42pm

Enjoy your "thank you series" as I put them!!!

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Re: If I looked

11th Sep 2013 2:09pm

yeah becoming a series i agree

thankyou :)

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14th Sep 2013 9:10am

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Re: If I looked

14th Sep 2013 9:12am

Love short pieces
Tnx kas

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