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Memories Drowned Out By Life
The fading has started
I cannot recall, certain things
regarding him
it feels good
but I also feel a bit cheated
I liked the darkness of the memory
the dull pain of healing
kinda like pressing on a bruise
it hurts but in a good way
then it dissipates
but you push on it anyways just to see
nothing, it's gone
I cannot recall, certain things
regarding him
it feels good
but I also feel a bit cheated
I liked the darkness of the memory
the dull pain of healing
kinda like pressing on a bruise
it hurts but in a good way
then it dissipates
but you push on it anyways just to see
nothing, it's gone
Published 3rd Sep 2013
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2013 8:46pm
I feel this poem is a bit more personal than your last ones, great lines Nikki!
3rd Sep 2013 10:05pm
Indeed-that is the final step in the sadness-realizing the missing sting--Awesome Write Nikki
3rd Sep 2013 10:33pm
3rd Sep 2013 11:26pm
i like the process. how you build it up the whole way but then at the end jus brush it off your shoulders..........thas tricky mam.....
well done miss nikki.....
well done miss nikki.....
4th Sep 2013 4:55am
great write
felt your words and the emotions
have pushed that bruise a few times myself
felt your words and the emotions
have pushed that bruise a few times myself
I hate it when you wake up with those mystery bruises and you're like Wtf I wasn't even drunk last night but you can't help but make them just a little bit bigger cause they irritate you and if they're gonna be there they might as well look a pretty shade of purple ... Yeah those last few lines had me thinking that. I can't help but wonder what the relationship between you and him was.. cool piece.
Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 6:33pm
Well written, Nikki. Had me checking for "bruises" but it seems they've all healed. Still, the feeling.. Nailed it.
6th Sep 2013 4:33am
6th Sep 2013 5:31pm
24th Oct 2013 4:17am
What-Ever, Nikkimoe, this jerk did not deserve you, he wants to hurt you with goodbyes, no, good riddance, you are the greatest in the fervent eyes of most all who tread your words and deeds.
27th Dec 2013 9:57am
Darkness is comfy, but damn, it's a hammock-on-a-cruise-ship feeling when you can't remember that bad shit as much anymore.
Mindfulness is cool.
Mindfulness is cool.
