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Making Love Like That
Long embraces
inhaling kisses
from wanting lips
desires on caresses
gentle hands
loving fingers
Meeting of souls
hearts beating together
amalgamation of minds
melting of bodies
together dancing
to music within
akin to thrusts of violins
trembling music, eyes closed
orchestra of sounds
breathless
gasps of adoration
shooting stars
Deeply sated
satiated
falling to earth
like coloured confetti
settling
entwined
Intertwined
bliss
Passion slumbers
until.
inhaling kisses
from wanting lips
desires on caresses
gentle hands
loving fingers
Meeting of souls
hearts beating together
amalgamation of minds
melting of bodies
together dancing
to music within
akin to thrusts of violins
trembling music, eyes closed
orchestra of sounds
breathless
gasps of adoration
shooting stars
Deeply sated
satiated
falling to earth
like coloured confetti
settling
entwined
Intertwined
bliss
Passion slumbers
until.
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26th Aug 2013 1:55am
Re: Loving It Like That
26th Aug 2013 2:01am
Such Beautiful Music Dear Grace-indeed a score worth revisiting over and over;)
Good Luck in the comp!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
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26th Aug 2013 2:02am
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26th Aug 2013 2:05am
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2013 2:31am
yes, intertwined grace...sensual write
good luck
strider
good luck
strider
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26th Aug 2013 8:17am
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26th Aug 2013 10:44am
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26th Aug 2013 10:56am
Re: Making Love Like That
26th Aug 2013 3:47pm
Very lovely...love these lines:
"Meeting of souls
hearts beating together
amalgamation of minds
melting of bodies
together dancing
to music within"
"Meeting of souls
hearts beating together
amalgamation of minds
melting of bodies
together dancing
to music within"
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26th Aug 2013 4:01pm
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26th Aug 2013 4:40pm
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2013 1:46am
Wonderful imagery Grace! Making love in this manner is to be cherished for what it is, soul melding, sensual meeting.
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