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Falling for you.
Fell down, got back up.
Looked at him and said "sup"
He looked at me with those brown eyes
They are as sweet as apple pies
I don't understand why he is such an attraction
He looks at me a smile is my reaction
Ok babe this ones for you
Don't let me fall and always stay true.
By: Bailee
Looked at him and said "sup"
He looked at me with those brown eyes
They are as sweet as apple pies
I don't understand why he is such an attraction
He looks at me a smile is my reaction
Ok babe this ones for you
Don't let me fall and always stay true.
By: Bailee
Published 16th Dec 2010
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16th Dec 2010 10:34pm
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17th Dec 2010 6:16pm
as promised like for like thx again 4 yr kind comments i love this poem the i particulary love the first 2 lines they made me giggle and if any of yr prose get a reaction good/bad/indifferent then u have done a good job i have 3 teenage daughters so the term sup i got straightway thats wat caused me to giggle u seem young so advice from an old man u are very gifted
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17th Dec 2010 10:30pm
17th Dec 2010 11:21pm
I really like this poem because it is very relatable. I know the feeling and it is short and simple but cute and hopeful! I looooove it!! :)
17th Dec 2010 11:49pm
