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Love is….
Love is the tenderness
Of a mother’s hug
a father’s touch
a lover’s embrace
a husband’s kiss
a wife’s caress
a daughter’s pat
a brother’s thump
a baby’s contented burp
They love and are loved
That how I see Love.
Of a mother’s hug
a father’s touch
a lover’s embrace
a husband’s kiss
a wife’s caress
a daughter’s pat
a brother’s thump
a baby’s contented burp
They love and are loved
That how I see Love.
Published 12th Aug 2013
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12th Aug 2013 4:36am
12th Aug 2013 4:39am
Lovely poem and yes you have the secret of love and tell us about it I like your tenderness
12th Aug 2013 4:42am
12th Aug 2013 4:49am
Love truly can be simplicity at it's core-Wonderful Truths Dear Grace!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
12th Aug 2013 4:52am
Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 5:03am
Yes it is those things and more grace...nice write!
12th Aug 2013 5:09am
12th Aug 2013 8:13am
Very true Grace, imagine being without those things. Some people are, so sad.
Nicely written.
Nicely written.
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 4:29pm
Just beautiful
Good luck in the comp!
Good luck in the comp!
13th Aug 2013 1:16am
13th Aug 2013 10:09am
Love is so many things to so many people... and you've captured many of those things here in your excellent poem, my friend! A very down-to-earth, realistic and yet poetic (and quite sentimental too I see) take on the idea of love. Great work, from a great poetess! :)
