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Beautiful Illusion
She ambles through my heart,
like an anarchist's brick through a window.
How can I protect myself
from the onslaught of her love?
She rifles through my emotions
like a bear on a picnic,
opens my thoughts
and licks all my dreams.
What am I supposed to do
when I see how she rambles
army ant tactics
and wilderness loss?
On the brink of total erosion,
I feel like a glacier, a global warmed beach.
Taking me down,
she lays out my body,
death and destruction,
my beautiful illusion.
runningturtle87
like an anarchist's brick through a window.
How can I protect myself
from the onslaught of her love?
She rifles through my emotions
like a bear on a picnic,
opens my thoughts
and licks all my dreams.
What am I supposed to do
when I see how she rambles
army ant tactics
and wilderness loss?
On the brink of total erosion,
I feel like a glacier, a global warmed beach.
Taking me down,
she lays out my body,
death and destruction,
my beautiful illusion.
runningturtle87
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Re: Beautiful Illusion
10th Aug 2013 3:39am
The dangers of love...bringing hidden pain through open passion. Marvelous write~
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10th Aug 2013 3:57am
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 3:41am
Nice write rt...
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10th Aug 2013 3:58am
Re: Beautiful Illusion
10th Aug 2013 3:42am
Sounds like all attempts to resist
are futile.
"Taking me down,
she lays out my body,
death and destruction,
my beautiful illusion."
Strong lines.
Potent write... Pan
are futile.
"Taking me down,
she lays out my body,
death and destruction,
my beautiful illusion."
Strong lines.
Potent write... Pan
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re: Re: Beautiful Illusion
10th Aug 2013 3:58am
Re: Beautiful Illusion
Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 5:12am
Sounds more solid than an illusion to have that effect. But oh, the images - bears and army ants ... =)
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10th Aug 2013 8:54am
Yes, allusions to Walden Pond where Henry David Thoreau spent two years in voluntary isolation....
Re: Beautiful Illusion
10th Aug 2013 5:22am
you slam dunked this and then drove it home further with the pic!!! u took us right there..
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10th Aug 2013 8:56am
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 8:51am
I loved the imagery here, Sir. A truly beautiful scribe.
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10th Aug 2013 8:58am
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10th Aug 2013 5:13pm
re: Re: Beautiful Illusion
10th Aug 2013 5:19pm
Thank you...death and destruction become an illusion in the
infinite now of intimacy.
infinite now of intimacy.
Re: Beautiful Illusion
10th Aug 2013 5:18pm
Thank you...death and destruction become an illusion in the infinite now of intimacy.