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Come Together
Crawl inside me
with your profound
words
Address my mind
leaving traces all over
my heart
Only you can unite
my thoughts with
your pleasure
with your profound
words
Address my mind
leaving traces all over
my heart
Only you can unite
my thoughts with
your pleasure
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9th Aug 2013 5:39am
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Re: Come Together
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Aug 2013 8:40am
9th Aug 2013 6:43am
The power of words is immense....they make me feel like a king or the King or Don Juan...or they make me feel like Barney Fife or Gilligan :D As you know I love to be uplifted and to uplift by words :)
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re: Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 6:58am
Barney Fife...Gilligan ...lmao ;)
I enjoy uplifting ...
Gilligan would have been fun! HA HA
I enjoy uplifting ...
Gilligan would have been fun! HA HA
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 8:38am
Naaaah Mrs. Howell was the sex pot :)
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9th Aug 2013 8:55am
Oh yeah..she was the naughty one,
I know she was...Ginger had nothing
on her ;)
I know she was...Ginger had nothing
on her ;)
Re: Come Together
9th Aug 2013 7:39am
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9th Aug 2013 9:00am
For some reason the extended importance of the "you" identified made me think of King Louis XIV, "the sun king".
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9th Aug 2013 9:04am
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9th Aug 2013 9:51am
Few words that say a lot. Could be read with an erotic interpretation (this way with words reminded me of the some of Magdalena's albeit more-worded poems).
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9th Aug 2013 9:59am
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 11:14am
short with tall meaning tl...
strider
strider
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9th Aug 2013 11:17am
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9th Aug 2013 6:09pm
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9th Aug 2013 11:18pm
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 8:33pm
Tommie,
Crawl, address and unite that's the simple pleasures, right Skipper?
That's right little buddy. Now you run down to the lagoon and keep watch on the Minnow. I've got some simple pleasure to help Tommie with back at the hut.....LOL!!! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Crawl, address and unite that's the simple pleasures, right Skipper?
That's right little buddy. Now you run down to the lagoon and keep watch on the Minnow. I've got some simple pleasure to help Tommie with back at the hut.....LOL!!! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 1:49am
Such a delicious task
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