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Melt~
Like softly played music
sighs escape me
Drawing pleasure from
me with words
I recognize his feelings
as my own
We live in our poetry while
true thoughts melt
sighs escape me
Drawing pleasure from
me with words
I recognize his feelings
as my own
We live in our poetry while
true thoughts melt
Published 8th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 6:49pm
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8th Aug 2013 7:16pm
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 8:27pm
"Drawing pleasure from
me with words"
Is a sweet thought and the goal of any poet :)
Very nice Tommie!
me with words"
Is a sweet thought and the goal of any poet :)
Very nice Tommie!
8th Aug 2013 11:08pm
Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 00:14am
Well you thought correctly, as usual, my poetry confectioner friend :)
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 10:32pm
nice little ditty tl....
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8th Aug 2013 11:17pm
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8th Aug 2013 11:41pm
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 1:49am
Beautiful words loved this
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