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Cling~
Silence clings to her
fractured thoughts
but she still smiles
She can see all of
herself tasting his
tender touch
Across her waiting
skin braids of leather
take her breath away
Taking small sips he
drinks her slowly until
she shines inside out
Those thoughts cling
to her wilted petals
like a spider web
fractured thoughts
but she still smiles
She can see all of
herself tasting his
tender touch
Across her waiting
skin braids of leather
take her breath away
Taking small sips he
drinks her slowly until
she shines inside out
Those thoughts cling
to her wilted petals
like a spider web
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Re: Cling~
10th Aug 2013 6:33am
"Silence clings to her
fractured thoughts
but she still smiles" <---- Beautiful start.
Lovely ink !
fractured thoughts
but she still smiles" <---- Beautiful start.
Lovely ink !
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10th Aug 2013 6:44am
Re: Cling~
10th Aug 2013 6:35am
this is beautiful, Tommie. the poem & the painting reflect each other. your work causes a slight & pleasant dizziness...
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re: Re: Cling~
10th Aug 2013 6:45am
Re: Cling~
Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 7:00am
The parallel of thoughts and a spider's web is perfect. Intimacy is a powerful thing and thoughts of past or hoped for encounters are as soft and delicate as silk but solid and strong like steel girders clinging so tenaciously to our hearts :)
A thought provoking, well written piece.
A thought provoking, well written piece.
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re: Re: Cling~
10th Aug 2013 1:55pm
I agree Lerd!
Wanting to firmly grip that past and hope for a redo at times!
Thank you my friend! :)
Wanting to firmly grip that past and hope for a redo at times!
Thank you my friend! :)
Re: Cling~
10th Aug 2013 7:01am
"She can see all of
herself tasting his
tender touch"
Ahh T.L this is tender.
Take in every touch.
Wonderful... Pan
herself tasting his
tender touch"
Ahh T.L this is tender.
Take in every touch.
Wonderful... Pan
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10th Aug 2013 1:55pm
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10th Aug 2013 7:26am
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10th Aug 2013 1:56pm
Re: Cling~
Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 10:01am
One of your best poems tl....strider
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12th Aug 2013 10:27am