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Maya Walk
I dream again of Maya
Where I walk alone
Along the darkened river
beyond the swirls
Of promised Eden
Along the Maya walkway
In the gardens of Gaia
Hold I the fronds
Of lush palms
Like prism of colours
Mists of time
Fogs of existence
Songs of love
Dances of life
Awaits beyond
I walk in Maya
Alone again
Towards the end
To a new beginning
In my dream.
Where I walk alone
Along the darkened river
beyond the swirls
Of promised Eden
Along the Maya walkway
In the gardens of Gaia
Hold I the fronds
Of lush palms
Like prism of colours
Mists of time
Fogs of existence
Songs of love
Dances of life
Awaits beyond
I walk in Maya
Alone again
Towards the end
To a new beginning
In my dream.
Published 8th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 10:36pm
beautiful grace!
9th Aug 2013 3:06am
Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 1:52am
A stunningly beautiful write...as always....
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11th Aug 2013 4:14am
Beautiful poem, which I read in two ways. In Hinduism, maya is illusion. In the Hebrew, it means spring or brook. As your accompanying photo suggests, the narrator is happy to walk by the water and the beautiful gardens. But to walk in maya, in a dream state, suggests walking in illusion, even though it might be a pleasant one.
I love this poem.
I love this poem.
11th Aug 2013 6:12am
In my language it means etherworld. A halfway world between there and here. Thank you jagracia for reading and commenting on the humble poem.
