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Suzie-Q and Bill
I stood in a doorway
watching
a distant valley sun
splashes
red and purple
secure
while wild ginger
combs
the hallowed ground
waves
My Black Eyed Susan
sings
in the gentle wind
sending
rippled pleasures
across
my burning skin
swathed
in shafts of light
bathe
cattail and sweet flag
softly
hush caressing, as a gentle hand
watching
a distant valley sun
splashes
red and purple
secure
while wild ginger
combs
the hallowed ground
waves
My Black Eyed Susan
sings
in the gentle wind
sending
rippled pleasures
across
my burning skin
swathed
in shafts of light
bathe
cattail and sweet flag
softly
hush caressing, as a gentle hand
Published 7th Aug 2013
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7th Aug 2013 8:33am
.....beautiful, simply beautiful, Soul! :)
Soft and tender flow! Truly enjoyed this! Xo
Soft and tender flow! Truly enjoyed this! Xo
7th Aug 2013 11:03pm
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 10:24am
a treat soul....thanks
7th Aug 2013 11:08pm
7th Aug 2013 3:04pm
7th Aug 2013 11:11pm
Awwww thank You Dear Red, so very kind!!!
I Love when the flowers grow all willy-nilly like that:)
I Love when the flowers grow all willy-nilly like that:)
Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 3:34pm
souladareatease,
Beautiful visual my friend! I can feel the wind....
tornado
Beautiful visual my friend! I can feel the wind....
tornado
7th Aug 2013 11:13pm
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9th Aug 2013 2:18am
Soul
My man.
Your poetry just gets better n better with every new one you write.
Keep up the beauty in words
Kg
My man.
Your poetry just gets better n better with every new one you write.
Keep up the beauty in words
Kg
10th Aug 2013 8:25pm
10th Aug 2013 4:57pm
I could see that you have developed your style and it's getting better every time. I'm trying to figure out your title...where does Suzie-Q and Bill fit. I'm lost my friend, please fill me up...
10th Aug 2013 8:27pm
Your too kind as well Engr. thank You my Friend!!!
nothing deep...just silliness--Suzie for Black-eyed Susan and Bill for Sweet William :)
nothing deep...just silliness--Suzie for Black-eyed Susan and Bill for Sweet William :)
10th Aug 2013 10:15pm
You have affirmed my growing theory that if the world had more gardeners we would have less violence...
16th Aug 2013 2:11am
14th Aug 2013 5:21pm
Tranquil, a swaying poem.
Stunning imagery, I could stay in that universe all day.
Stunning imagery, I could stay in that universe all day.
16th Aug 2013 2:12am
