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Adrift
Who walks in light cast shadows
where one-sided talk echo's
dreams of the fallen wing
beating life under Sun
thumping painfully
as the day slows
folding deep
into paths
where it
prays
~Tomorrow~
Highs
bemoan
moon beam
smiles hiding
beneath colour
of spirited wander
where the trees glisten
among woodland creatures
dancing in palance lime time
creating purposed songs to life
where one-sided talk echo's
dreams of the fallen wing
beating life under Sun
thumping painfully
as the day slows
folding deep
into paths
where it
prays
~Tomorrow~
Highs
bemoan
moon beam
smiles hiding
beneath colour
of spirited wander
where the trees glisten
among woodland creatures
dancing in palance lime time
creating purposed songs to life
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Re: Adrift
4th Aug 2013 11:22pm
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4th Aug 2013 11:32pm
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2013 11:26pm
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4th Aug 2013 11:33pm
Re: Adrift
5th Aug 2013 2:05am
among woodland creatures
dancing in palance lime time
creating purposed songs to life...
Beautiful words, Soul. Good read.
dancing in palance lime time
creating purposed songs to life...
Beautiful words, Soul. Good read.
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5th Aug 2013 2:09am
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 2:48am
I had to look up the term palance lime - but oh, thank you! It now evokes pictures...
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5th Aug 2013 2:56am
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 2:53am
lovely create write soul...strider :)
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5th Aug 2013 2:57am
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5th Aug 2013 2:55am
I hate when I drift away from you and your ink too long, Soul! It leaves me on empty!
Full now, thanks to this amazing ink! :)
Full now, thanks to this amazing ink! :)
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5th Aug 2013 2:59am
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 9:20pm
This poem is like a mirror, the first part seems to contain more of the bright, the light in its essence, the last part starts with the pale moon and then drifts of in its shiny darkness...
Great poem, Soul
Great poem, Soul
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7th Aug 2013 5:53am
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14th Aug 2013 5:23pm
You put a voice to nature,
very creative.
Your writing's a window to the most beautiful places.
very creative.
Your writing's a window to the most beautiful places.
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16th Aug 2013 2:14am