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'Abstract'
Abstracted view,
thru tapered eyes
A shallow trek
into the whole
of nothingness...
Where prisms
color everything
translucently, black
in vibrant allusions
to life...
thru tapered eyes
A shallow trek
into the whole
of nothingness...
Where prisms
color everything
translucently, black
in vibrant allusions
to life...
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Re: 'Abstract'
Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 00:31am
Paints a picture with black which is not a colour - it absorbs all colours and white which is the lack of colours.....so nothing is there.....well penned
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Exactly right, hence the title Abstract... The 'color' is methaphorical, yet hued in thought :)
Appreciate you my dear lady :)
Appreciate you my dear lady :)
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 00:59am
These shorter works of yours are wonderful - they provoke thought, instead of providing answers.
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6th Aug 2013 1:02am
Well I'm happy you approve my sweetie pie :)
Just don't expect a convert to haiku form at some point lol
Appreciate ur support tons :)
Just don't expect a convert to haiku form at some point lol
Appreciate ur support tons :)
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6th Aug 2013 8:27pm
Oooh, no convert to haiku form? What a pity! Let ME do that for you, dear :-).
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Re: 'Abstract'
6th Aug 2013 1:39am
I admit this one had me stumped..I initially thought of the constellations..very engaging write my dude...
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Re: 'Abstract'
6th Aug 2013 2:02am
Yea well you know how we do it bro. Gotta keep em guessin n wantin more! lol...thank you so much always bro!
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 2:54am
We sometimes want to believe in something that isn't there. :)
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6th Aug 2013 3:34am
Yea we do, in fact I believe I want some chocolate brownies with raspberry sauce n chopped nuts topped with vanilla ice cream!! lol thank u my friend :)
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 3:37am
I believe I'd like to share......in fact I know I would. LOL!!!! :)
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6th Aug 2013 4:17pm
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6th Aug 2013 4:21pm
U ain't Neva lie lady! I do believe last time I looked I saw those pink diamonds in the sky! lol
Thank u always :)
Thank u always :)
Re: 'Abstract'
6th Aug 2013 8:32pm
Stunning! Learned some new words and am definitely absorbed by the image of such a densely woven nothingness. That's wonderful!
Chi
Chi
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Re: 'Abstract'
18th Sep 2013 3:33pm
I love poems about nothingness that make me feel something. abstract indeed. well done.
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Re. 'Abstract'
10th Jun 2016 10:47am
tapered eyes...
shallow...
slipping into a dream perhaps?
black...
life...
black (death) absorbs light (life)...leads me to feel this as passing over?
beautiful Poe, immersed in the stillness of this. Lady Xx
shallow...
slipping into a dream perhaps?
black...
life...
black (death) absorbs light (life)...leads me to feel this as passing over?
beautiful Poe, immersed in the stillness of this. Lady Xx
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10th Jun 2016 11:30am
I hadn't thought about it in that manner, but it's definitely an interesting angle! :) thank you for your
interpretation n your continued support, truly appreciate it :)
interpretation n your continued support, truly appreciate it :)