Beyond

shared.......keep working it.

Will do, turtle, will do.

:)

Thank you kindly, Gabriel.

Another little gem ataki...

Strider, thanks, man.

"eyes breath wide" wonderful image

I quite like the extends, bends, summoning space line, a great little mouthful it is

last stanza is pretty good too, slight change into lines less crystal as it were, but certainy provocably poetic

good show,  shine on

Craic, your thoughts are much appreciated, thanks for stopping by.

The sea, its horizon lends ideas of eternity and space in my mind.  Very nice Ata!

You wouldn't believe some of the views I've seen... Cheers, Mike, too kind as always.

I love the first stanza best, though they are both good. :)

Thanks for the love, Rachel!

:)

What a neat write, :)

Cheers, bluemoon!

:)

I stare at the blue horizon frequently searching for the next set immersed in my sanctuary. I can feel this, every word, awesome!

Sanctuary! Yes, something like that. Thanks, Case!

Who'd have thunk science could be fun. :)

Me, me! I dig science.

:)

what have you been smoking girl? pass that shit lol
awesome!

Totally would pass you some, but it was just ozone...

Thanks, 13.

I really like this poem, It is from a place that crosses a line between real and surreal, short but well cut words, Ataki!

Thank you, Mourganna. Boundaries, inside and out.

My eyes breathe wide the blue horizon..... Phwoar! That first stanza especially is gold, the only thing I would change is the word near for far, but that's just me. Hehe staring into space has never sounded better :)

Thanks for that "phwoar" lol. It's good to hear that.

:)

felt like taking a breath after holding it too long--Truly Love this Atakti!!!

Thank you, Soul, too kind...

Atakti condensed word soup. Just add thoughts,stir and will expand the size of the universe

Omg, Puppy, you leave the best comments. Thanks!