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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 3:44pm
deep and real write red...thanks for being a real poet!
strider
strider
26th Jul 2013 3:56pm
Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 4:11pm
very deep, Red..this one resonates loud and clear..vividly real :-) nice work!
26th Jul 2013 4:16pm
I thinks secretly most of us can relate to this one.
Thanks Miki, always appreciate the luv.
Red
Thanks Miki, always appreciate the luv.
Red
26th Jul 2013 4:26pm
"Illicit attribute....."......upskirt visionary high priestess..the floor is looking good about now...
26th Jul 2013 4:28pm
26th Jul 2013 4:48pm
26th Jul 2013 4:50pm
26th Jul 2013 5:07pm
superb a real master class in poetry and story telling.
Much enjoyed as always
Marcus
Much enjoyed as always
Marcus
26th Jul 2013 7:08pm
Coming from you Marcus that is a very high praise thank you so very much. :-)
Red
Red
26th Jul 2013 5:17pm
26th Jul 2013 7:10pm
What a lovely way to be called smarty pants hahaha
Thank you D for the wonderful comment!
Red
Thank you D for the wonderful comment!
Red
Like a flame that when an attempt is made to put it out it only grows higher. (or as Bowie sang, "Putting Out A Fire With Gasoline") So many analogies come into my head when reading this...
26th Jul 2013 8:08pm
Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 8:39pm
Red!......my dear....this is sheer genius.....the reason without apology....the conviction without judge nor jury...the dark redemption that awaits every person that's ever scribed...anything..
26th Jul 2013 10:45pm
Well! I thank you Naaj most humbly for the complement, as for the other three, yes, yes and yes...Very astute!
Red
Red
26th Jul 2013 9:17pm
I agree 100 with Naajir...this is CLASSIC n a master class example on poetry 101!
26th Jul 2013 10:46pm
Poe you flatterer you! muaaahsss hehehe I am so happy you liked it, Thank you!
Red
Red
26th Jul 2013 10:01pm
Absolutely adore this. It definitely reaches me on a personal level. Quite honestly this could apply to every individual.
26th Jul 2013 10:47pm
27th Jul 2013 3:32am
Kickin' wicked Red!!!
I Love it much(sensual is an always--but at times as in this write Your word choice is always tops!!!)
I Love it much(sensual is an always--but at times as in this write Your word choice is always tops!!!)
27th Jul 2013 3:50am
You flatter me Soul, I'll juts eat it up like candy lol Thanks for reading!
Red
Red
27th Jul 2013 4:51pm
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