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Gone...Adrift
He's unrattled
by the shadows
she kicks angrily
towards the moon...
n' swiftly sidesteps
the callous barrage of stars
falling on petrified branches...
as they shield scabrous eyes
that no longer bleed hope for
greener tomorrows...
much like a pantomime
without sound, he mimics joy
from memory...
embedded
into the fabric of
loneliness' breastplate...
by the shadows
she kicks angrily
towards the moon...
n' swiftly sidesteps
the callous barrage of stars
falling on petrified branches...
as they shield scabrous eyes
that no longer bleed hope for
greener tomorrows...
much like a pantomime
without sound, he mimics joy
from memory...
embedded
into the fabric of
loneliness' breastplate...
Published 20th Jul 2013
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20th Jul 2013 1:28pm
Damn this was awesome!
I wanna' marry your pen and have lots of ink babies....Xo
I wanna' marry your pen and have lots of ink babies....Xo
20th Jul 2013 1:54pm
Lmao aaawww ok baby...~drops to knee n places pen at feet n asks for her pen in marriage~ n now I pronounce
us INK n WIFE lol thank j sweetie!
us INK n WIFE lol thank j sweetie!
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20th Jul 2013 2:48pm
Well you're always welcome to come along for the ride lady!
lol thank u so very much :)
lol thank u so very much :)
20th Jul 2013 8:02pm
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 2:29pm
Brilliant! penned with perfection :) x
20th Jul 2013 3:01pm
20th Jul 2013 2:54pm
This one exudes a quiet anger and disappointment, there is power in this piece Poe.
Red
Red
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 8:07pm
You know, I love the fun poems and stories, but it's when you dig deep like this that your words truly come alive.
Speaking of which - whatever has happened to my favorite little guy? =)
Speaking of which - whatever has happened to my favorite little guy? =)
21st Jul 2013 5:24am
Aaawww thank you babe, I'm happy you like my ink all around n specially when it's funny lol as for lil j? I wasn't really getting anyone reading them but I'll post soon :)
