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Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
I'm red, so red
I'm gonna make
damn sure you
see stars
my face will be
the only one
flashing inside
your mind
do I taste good
in your thoughts
in the center of
your brain
can you reach out
and touch me as I
lay on your bed in
my birthday suit
will you rock my
body all night
like I'm the only
one
will you be ready
to give it to me
over and over
again, take me
to the top
I need a crazy dose
of touching, mind
blowing, breaking,
comfort
to be completely
intertwined with
your salty
skin
Licking the taste
off each other
letting the flavor
dance
on every taste bud
than swallow it
down, tongue
gliding
past my lips as
I get what I
want from
you
I'm gonna make
damn sure you
see stars
my face will be
the only one
flashing inside
your mind
do I taste good
in your thoughts
in the center of
your brain
can you reach out
and touch me as I
lay on your bed in
my birthday suit
will you rock my
body all night
like I'm the only
one
will you be ready
to give it to me
over and over
again, take me
to the top
I need a crazy dose
of touching, mind
blowing, breaking,
comfort
to be completely
intertwined with
your salty
skin
Licking the taste
off each other
letting the flavor
dance
on every taste bud
than swallow it
down, tongue
gliding
past my lips as
I get what I
want from
you
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Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
17th Jul 2013 11:52pm
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17th Jul 2013 11:55pm
Such a great way to spend the day...especially since it's been in the 90's here.... :-)
Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 11:53pm
High-voltage write tl...
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re: Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
17th Jul 2013 11:55pm
Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 00:03am
re: Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 2:49am
Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
Anonymous
18th Jul 2013 00:51am
Two Pump Chump here!! ;) Great title! This is a fun piece. The b-day suit line is playful. My favorite line:
"Licking the taste
off each other
letting the flavor
dance"
A dirty dance indeed ;)
"Licking the taste
off each other
letting the flavor
dance"
A dirty dance indeed ;)
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re: Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 2:49am
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2013 6:01am
Yes Ma'am!!
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Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 3:18am
Wow! You tell the man just what you want, lay it out in front of him then he damn sure better deliver the goods.
Nice tutorial, Tommie... Pan
Nice tutorial, Tommie... Pan
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re: Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 6:05am
Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 6:43am
Echo lerdgoin and hungrypan. A promise to make a memorable night of it ("my face will be the only one flashing inside your mind"). High excitement rating.
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re: Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 2:37pm
Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 9:50pm
re: Re: Need More Than A Two Pump Chump
18th Jul 2013 10:15pm
I'm not running out anytime soon Vman...I have plenty!Thanks for reading... ;))