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A carnal tale

A carnal tale    
of an angels sins,  
the unheard story  
from the eyes within.  
   
a confession of sorts  
to her amorous lover,  
who cheated and lied  
and mentally abused her.  
   
Remember that line  
you so eagerly crossed?  
when you tripped and fell over  
and your mask fell off?  
   
all those stories and lies  
you quickly spat out,  
clouded her pattering heart,  
filling her head with doubt.  
   
With a taste for revenge  
from a broken trust  
dripping with rage  
she gave in to her lusts..  
   
taking what was yours  
the day her heart died  
between her and your ally  
great passions arised  
   
Entrapped by a taste for revenge  
he fell short of any regret  
Sinfully and willingly  
Fulfilling desires you never met  
   
   
a hidden scar she carries  
a love so cold and untasteful  
years of waisted devotion  
is what drove this angel unfaithful  
   
With brutal love you drown her  
feeding lies straight to her veins  
suffocating the very air you gave her  
to keep hold to your fiery reins  
   
there was a time she stood by you  
but you stayed a step ahead  
loving yourself and others before her  
when you could have loved her instead.  
   
You regret the pain you caused her  
but now shes just lyrics in a song  
the chorus you have stuck in your head  
a great love thats now gone.
Written by bluerose
Published | Edited 17th Jul 2013
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