Cruel

truth here red...perspective indeed!

strider

You have summed it up all.
Nice work well done.

Yes what we see is never all true, there is always more than meets the eye.

Thanks Strider

Red

Thank you GP Glad to see a new face enjoying my work.

Red

Sing it, Sister...

True you have spoken.

Ahh... my sweet turtle man, how high do you want me to go?

Thanks,
Red

I try, thanks GP.

Life is as such Red dear...but we live on, love and laugh...as usual. Good read dear.

This was for a comp on fixed verses, I think it turned out well. Thanks Grace.

Red

Hmm... I respect the basic theme you used here, but it felt like you just beat the reader over the head by repeating the same lines... I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, but interesting read, nonetheless ;-)

Yeah I understand what your saying D but this style is called "Villanelle" and it has a very distinct manner in which it must be created and because it is for a competition I had to remain true to the form. Thanks for the honest feedback I do appreciate it.

Red

Ahhh, I understand now, hon.... Forgive my ignorance... Diggin' the versatility ;-)

:-)

Woman, Your pen becomes lethal the minute it begins to leak ink; just torturing the poor paper beautifully. <----Now that's Cruel! :)
Love this message, endorsing this message!
Pen On~

Thanks Rain this coming from from the woman who puts the boom in bomb lol that's says a lot thanks ma!

Red

You guys and Your fancy terms "fixed" how cruel...
;) I loved the deepness of this very much Dear Red-Pen On with Your Greatness!!!

It is a formal style of writing poetry lol as I stated above its called Villanelle and it was made for a comp. ;p lol thanks for visit hon love the comment.

Red

Something I cannot stress enough to myself Gypsy.  Excellent insightful write my dear.

Thank you Magda I am happy you found it read worthy and could relate to this piece.

Red

fantastic red, much enjoyed and inspiring as always

Marcus

Thanks Marcus your encouraging words are always well met.

Red

Very thought provoking and inspiring Red..And too true..some folks do seem to need a certain amount of emotional upheaval just to feel stimulated....a need for theater. Your presentation brought this to light with the fluidity of an artist's pen....lovely..

The topic was personal but the piece was a competition entry, thanks Naaj for the positive feedback.


Red

Exceptional n  thoughtful... I must say the repetition
made it all the powerful, becuz you know sometimes you gotta tell the 'slow' ones as my mom would say
a few times  to get it to stick lol

Yes this style of poetry serves to emphasize the theme or topic of the piece,I am happy it reads well and that it is being well received. Thanks Poe! :-)

Red