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9th Jul 2013 10:34pm
Hot stuff Gypsy, quite the seduction. Very passionate and sensual write. Beautiful work dear.
9th Jul 2013 10:45pm
You know Magda, us girls really do kick ass when it comes to this genre hahahahah poor boys don't stand a chance.Thanks!
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9th Jul 2013 10:48pm
I wanna' pen that writes like yours! :(
This is so damn sexy that you seduced Me with your seduction! Set us ablaze, we don't mind! Xo
This is so damn sexy that you seduced Me with your seduction! Set us ablaze, we don't mind! Xo
9th Jul 2013 10:50pm
Hahaha Rain I laid the prep work now go find hubby and seduce the hell out of him! hahaha Thanks beautiful!
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9th Jul 2013 10:53pm
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9th Jul 2013 10:57pm
Hahaha Gabriel my incorrigible romantic, you are most welcome so happy you enjoyed this.
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10th Jul 2013 1:23am
Sexy Pen indeed Dear Red!!!
"You know Magda, us girls really do kick ass when it comes to this genre "<--Indeed Temptress!!!
"You know Magda, us girls really do kick ass when it comes to this genre "<--Indeed Temptress!!!
10th Jul 2013 2:12am
Hey I kinda like that"temptress" huh, yeah suits me fine. Lololol Thanks Soul!
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10th Jul 2013 2:23am
Funny side note...on writing that...I went back to catch earlier writes I missed in the day and the first one I hit was Striders write "the magic of sweet Temptress verse" LOLOL--It MUST be true ;)
10th Jul 2013 2:54am
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10th Jul 2013 3:22am
Hey ma where been hiding lolol thanks for stopping by I appreciate the love.
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 3:25am
A temptress-write indeed red!
enjoyed...
enjoyed...
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10th Jul 2013 3:27pm
I think they go hand in hand sweets, passion both good and bad thrive within me,thank you so much for stopping by. :-)
Red
Red
10th Jul 2013 4:09pm
Lmao at ur comment to Mag... Wow u don't think any of us have a shot? lol this was most definitely ablaze in lustful imagery n mental stimuli, truly a mega hot inkspill n a fav!
I meant at WRITING erotica, you guys write stuff that delves deeper into the sexual not sensual hahaha don't get your boxers in a twist. :-) thanks sweets!
Red
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10th Jul 2013 4:43pm
I would like the burlesque queen to go with ambrosia (LOL)...hmmm, that must be yummy and so fragilelicioooooooooooooooooooooous!
10th Jul 2013 5:27pm
That's sooo much fun! I am thrilled you enjoyed this piece, it was nice to see you comment my friend.
Red
Red
10th Jul 2013 6:53pm
been busy with my solar project lately...but rest assured, every now and then, I'll pop in. I really did enjoy this piece so much,I can almost feel it!
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10th Jul 2013 9:27pm
So very sensual it caresses the senses and delights.. steamy and magical write!!! thank you peace Crim :)
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 9:17pm
Gypsy this is what I call "Sick!!!!" Which in my book is outstanding! Hot hot piece!
13th Jul 2013 9:55pm
Thank you Lila(lilac in Spanish)I am happy to see your enthusiasm and that you enjoyed this piece so much, I am flattered. ;)
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 9:59pm
Ji ji un poco más entusiasmada de lo normal pero con razón :)
13th Jul 2013 10:09pm
