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Forgiven~
His tongue was as lethal
as his fist, sharp stinging
pain from his
lashes made my ears
bleed and my tears
empty
he was always precise
on his mark, first the
name calling, than
came a quick
blow, the back of his
hand on my
cheek bone
clenched teeth, searing
pain, broken pieces of
me on his hands,
year's of attacks from
his so called
love
the floor was my only
friend, on sore knees I
begged for change
and my pleading was
answered in the form
of sweet
words
as his fist, sharp stinging
pain from his
lashes made my ears
bleed and my tears
empty
he was always precise
on his mark, first the
name calling, than
came a quick
blow, the back of his
hand on my
cheek bone
clenched teeth, searing
pain, broken pieces of
me on his hands,
year's of attacks from
his so called
love
the floor was my only
friend, on sore knees I
begged for change
and my pleading was
answered in the form
of sweet
words
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Re: Forgiven~
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28th Jun 2013 4:48pm
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Re: Forgiven~
28th Jun 2013 6:31pm
Im sorry to say this, but There's no forgiving the physical abuse, no matter how sweet the words... if this is true you truly need to go...
before it becomes a situation where you can't leave
under ur own power... Deeply sad ink my friend
before it becomes a situation where you can't leave
under ur own power... Deeply sad ink my friend
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re: Re: Forgiven~
28th Jun 2013 8:18pm
Just thinking of a friend!Trust me...this has never happened to me, I know where mine sleeps...I'd gut him like a fish!!
Thanks for reading and caring! :)
Thanks for reading and caring! :)
Re: Forgiven~
28th Jun 2013 6:53pm
Tommielynn...I will share this on facebook
there is someone I want to read this
I so hope this is a work of fiction for you
but it is an amazing piece of work
there is someone I want to read this
I so hope this is a work of fiction for you
but it is an amazing piece of work
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re: Re: Forgiven~
28th Jun 2013 8:23pm
This is for a friend!Thank you for sharing! ;) I cook the food around here...need I say more! lol :-)
thank you D
thank you D
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2013 7:05pm
excellent spilling of tough realty tl
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28th Jun 2013 8:25pm
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Re: Forgiven~
Anonymous
28th Jun 2013 9:55pm
I'm glad I read your comment to Poetikmind...I suspected you weren't talking about yourself...thanks for the fish gutting image :D
Physical and mental abuse are techniques used by a-holes insecure with their own manhood. I hope your friend got out of that dysfunctional; situation.
Physical and mental abuse are techniques used by a-holes insecure with their own manhood. I hope your friend got out of that dysfunctional; situation.
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re: Re: Forgiven~
28th Jun 2013 10:06pm
Always glad to help with the violent images! :-)
Unfortunately she's still in the relationship :(
Unfortunately she's still in the relationship :(
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2013 10:22pm
Get a big 'ole fish, dead preferably, knock on their door and gut it right there in front of him. Then just say "you're next. If you don't stop messing with my friend" Oh oh and then say "I'd kick you in the balls if I thought you had any." ;)
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29th Jun 2013 10:10pm
hope u never had this happen your 2 classy and better for a guy like that your 2 far above him like the song..so high above me....
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29th Jun 2013 10:33pm
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 5:00pm
Sad this happened to your friend or anyone else for that matter but very captivating write.
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30th Jun 2013 5:04pm
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