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Tactfulness Required
When I met you, what I should have said was
Hello, instead of, Your fly’s undone
pointing out the pink lacy underwear
that I later found out was your girlfriends
Maybe then we could have been friends
instead of you being the man that wears pink lacy underwear
and me the accidental pervert that looked
© Indie Adams 2013
Written for Miki's "When I met you, what I should have said was..." comp
Hello, instead of, Your fly’s undone
pointing out the pink lacy underwear
that I later found out was your girlfriends
Maybe then we could have been friends
instead of you being the man that wears pink lacy underwear
and me the accidental pervert that looked
© Indie Adams 2013
Written for Miki's "When I met you, what I should have said was..." comp
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