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Twilight eyes
Astraeus and Eos beam
Titan twilight caressing
night arm to rosy dawn
flowing, one single charm
clasp together
taking sacrament
Heavens prayer box
Children tetris blowing breath
vertex sweeps created
babes that swirl whipping hooks
greet mother and father
under foot
letting cry
upon given wind
Kissing upon wandering stars
where both eyes
see,drifting turning keeping reach
dusk to Dawn peaks
floating dreamily
theirs heavenly
borne twirling on
Dawn of the stars
breath upon night
Oceanus sleeper, the daylight bringer
winged peace lover ease
ever touching
giving hugging
reflection theirs connected
These O painted pair
forever sing in harmony
Titan twilight caressing
night arm to rosy dawn
flowing, one single charm
clasp together
taking sacrament
Heavens prayer box
Children tetris blowing breath
vertex sweeps created
babes that swirl whipping hooks
greet mother and father
under foot
letting cry
upon given wind
Kissing upon wandering stars
where both eyes
see,drifting turning keeping reach
dusk to Dawn peaks
floating dreamily
theirs heavenly
borne twirling on
Dawn of the stars
breath upon night
Oceanus sleeper, the daylight bringer
winged peace lover ease
ever touching
giving hugging
reflection theirs connected
These O painted pair
forever sing in harmony
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Re: Twilight eyes
24th Jun 2013 5:19am
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24th Jun 2013 6:07am
Your pen is brilliant, Soul!
....twilight gives hope vision! So wonderfully done! Xo
....twilight gives hope vision! So wonderfully done! Xo
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24th Jun 2013 9:01am
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 1:45pm
Awesome soul...you are perfecting your craft
good luck
strider
good luck
strider
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24th Jun 2013 4:30pm
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24th Jun 2013 3:54pm
This reminds of a song that goes, "When the twilight is gone,....the birds are singing in harmony! Nicely done Soul!
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24th Jun 2013 4:32pm
Thank You Engr-which song is this?-glad it struck a note-Always appreciate Your visits to my humble writes!!!
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27th Jun 2013 1:28pm
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27th Jun 2013 9:01pm
All I have is a greatest hits by them...I shall be looking to listen--thank You My Friend!!!
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 4:25pm
Eloquently written, and has a sensual,
dreamy, romantic feel, soulmates
for all eternity...
dreamy, romantic feel, soulmates
for all eternity...
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24th Jun 2013 4:33pm
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26th Jun 2013 3:57am
Simply Beautiful Soul....
I agree with Red...
Your word verbage is breathtaking!
Fire
I agree with Red...
Your word verbage is breathtaking!
Fire
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Re: Twilight eyes
29th Jun 2013 12:20pm
Images flit 'n flutter all throughout,
this one has everything you do well in it.
Dawn of the stars
breath upon night
Oceanus sleeper, the daylight bringer
winged peace lover ease
ever touching
giving hugging
reflection theirs connected
Especially liked this one^^
:)
this one has everything you do well in it.
Dawn of the stars
breath upon night
Oceanus sleeper, the daylight bringer
winged peace lover ease
ever touching
giving hugging
reflection theirs connected
Especially liked this one^^
:)
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29th Jun 2013 8:12pm
Thank You Dear Scribbler- I so love those Myths--just about any culture but the Greek and Roman are so...dreamy.