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A garden of roses
How well it came to be
that sunset
at the fount of Eve
dominoes and piccolo's
fell and noted
a garden of roses
circles the tree
Therein trees top
rests a white dove
swathed softened sweet spot
nesting her Young
up there sees squirrels run
hiding a found nut
before it was caught
Out here in the glen
where the pixie pray
fawn dance ever beckoning
moonlight falls spray
their lighten cascades
streams glisten gentle waves
settling rest in zephyr wind
that sunset
at the fount of Eve
dominoes and piccolo's
fell and noted
a garden of roses
circles the tree
Therein trees top
rests a white dove
swathed softened sweet spot
nesting her Young
up there sees squirrels run
hiding a found nut
before it was caught
Out here in the glen
where the pixie pray
fawn dance ever beckoning
moonlight falls spray
their lighten cascades
streams glisten gentle waves
settling rest in zephyr wind
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Anonymous
19th Jun 2013 6:58pm
Lovely and serene. I want to be where the pixies pray. =)
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:)Thank You Dear Magdalena!!!(apologies for commenting late--grrr to things :( -my mind mostly-swore I commented earlier today...
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Anonymous
19th Jun 2013 7:37pm
nice write soul...swirled....strider
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19th Jun 2013 9:47pm
Re: A garden of roses
20th Jun 2013 9:04pm
You know how to lay the words so they fit
nicely within the lines of simplicity and profound meanings.
I read this over thrice, very well written :)
nicely within the lines of simplicity and profound meanings.
I read this over thrice, very well written :)
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re: Re: A garden of roses
21st Jun 2013 4:00am
Thank You for reading Deep Dear Scribbler--tis the magic of Your writes that grab me so!!!
Re: A garden of roses
20th Jun 2013 9:13pm
A gorgeous garden, Soul! :)
"Out here in the glen
where the pixie pray
fawn dance ever beckoning
moonlight falls spray"<---Loved! Xo
"Out here in the glen
where the pixie pray
fawn dance ever beckoning
moonlight falls spray"<---Loved! Xo
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21st Jun 2013 4:01am