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Sole Lament
He misses her, like the air he breathes
like the soft comfort of cotton fabric worn
like the sound of lullabyes soothes, and relieves
like a limb from a body, so sudden and violently torn
He misses her tenderness, sweet words caress
like the ultimate ephiphany of a perpetuitous lifetime
like the sublety of lofty dreams that the angels bless
like the pictures of beauty, evading a fragmented mind
He misses her
in all that she was to him, then yet to be
like how they envisioned quiet moments,
lost in one another
like when the laughter shared
hurt so good it made them drunk with silliness
like a child having felt love but nothing like this....
he's missing her, cant avoid the 'emptiness utter'
he's missing her like half a soul without the other....
like the soft comfort of cotton fabric worn
like the sound of lullabyes soothes, and relieves
like a limb from a body, so sudden and violently torn
He misses her tenderness, sweet words caress
like the ultimate ephiphany of a perpetuitous lifetime
like the sublety of lofty dreams that the angels bless
like the pictures of beauty, evading a fragmented mind
He misses her
in all that she was to him, then yet to be
like how they envisioned quiet moments,
lost in one another
like when the laughter shared
hurt so good it made them drunk with silliness
like a child having felt love but nothing like this....
he's missing her, cant avoid the 'emptiness utter'
he's missing her like half a soul without the other....
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Re: Sole Lament
Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 3:09pm
Sole or soul lament, bro; it's still an agony to bemoan. Deep, emotional pen.
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18th Jun 2013 3:11pm
yea, decided on SOLE because the obvious was SOUL...i just like being 'different' that way l.o.l.
thanks my man, much appreciated...
thanks my man, much appreciated...
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18th Jun 2013 3:30pm
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18th Jun 2013 3:32pm
thankfully, it doesnt hurt as bad as when i wrote though... thank you my dear sweet lady...i'm forever grateful for your sweet support... :)
Re: Sole Lament
18th Jun 2013 3:59pm
I did not know you missed me sooo much... sniff... sniff...:) a very melancholic piece, remember all things pass.
Red
Red
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18th Jun 2013 4:09pm
oh i have! i have! l.o.l... yes i do remember 'sorta' l.o.l. truly, i thank u n appreciate u much~ :)
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18th Jun 2013 4:31pm
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18th Jun 2013 4:37pm
hey thanks dude, yea it's sadly too common i suppose
but no less painful... appreciate your time n thoughts n will be returning the favor soon :)
but no less painful... appreciate your time n thoughts n will be returning the favor soon :)
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18th Jun 2013 4:45pm
aaaawwww thankies my sweetie... yea good thing for me though i cant actually display it now... when i inked it, it hurt waaaayy too much... :)
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 6:33pm
Another sweet, sad lament. You write these with such feeling. Some of your finest words come from such sadness - but I wish the sadness wasn't there.
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19th Jun 2013 00:18am
Thank you... I'm flattered by your sweet kind words n I'm honored by your support always :)
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 9:16pm
A heartwarming write, Poetikmind. Beautiful ink & expression. Enjoyed! :)
*Peace 'n Love* Carlene
*Peace 'n Love* Carlene
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19th Jun 2013 00:21am
thank you my friend, you make me feel so good with your continued support n praise of my inks... Truly appreciate you lady! :)
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