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Phosphoresce Parable
Purveyor of sustenance for the soul
Hunger, preceeded starvation’s latest toll
Linger not, for shadows shun the sun’s glare
While the ocean tosses, then regurgitates despair
Hunger, preceeded starvation’s latest toll
Full bellied satisfaction smiles within comfort's hold
Thoughts of fallible mind strewn about in disrepair
Truth seeks the light, whilst hope-filled followers stare
Linger not, for shadows shun the sun’s glare
People gather ‘round now a resurgence is near
Tablet’s of time of occurances aforementioned, retold
Gaze upon the mountain once ascended, sheltered, cold
While the ocean tosses, then regurgitates despair
A steadied ship ventures outwardly without fear
Seeing clearly once clouded eyes 'regains sight' of road
Strength returns to roost, relinquishing bartered possessions for a soul…
Hunger, preceeded starvation’s latest toll
Linger not, for shadows shun the sun’s glare
While the ocean tosses, then regurgitates despair
Hunger, preceeded starvation’s latest toll
Full bellied satisfaction smiles within comfort's hold
Thoughts of fallible mind strewn about in disrepair
Truth seeks the light, whilst hope-filled followers stare
Linger not, for shadows shun the sun’s glare
People gather ‘round now a resurgence is near
Tablet’s of time of occurances aforementioned, retold
Gaze upon the mountain once ascended, sheltered, cold
While the ocean tosses, then regurgitates despair
A steadied ship ventures outwardly without fear
Seeing clearly once clouded eyes 'regains sight' of road
Strength returns to roost, relinquishing bartered possessions for a soul…
Published 17th Jun 2013
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17th Jun 2013 6:57pm
Damn I felt dumb reading this the first time! o_O
Took me a second reading for your words to register!
#INeedJesusToday
Took me a second reading for your words to register!
#INeedJesusToday
17th Jun 2013 7:37pm
lmao! you are a treasure l.o.l. i'm glad you 'got it' together on the second go around pretty lady :) n thank u for ur continued support... :)
17th Jun 2013 8:28pm
Love this Poetikmind. It is great when the mist fades and everything becomes clear. Great write.
17th Jun 2013 10:15pm
Aaaawww thank you my dear sweet Anita! So happy you liked this inking from my thinking lol appreciate it much!
Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 9:14pm
It took me a while as well, but I think I understand moving forward with a new sense of purpose and clarity.
What is this style of poem called? I like this.
What is this style of poem called? I like this.
17th Jun 2013 10:20pm
aaaawww well nice to know u caught on! lol
It is indeed clarity, the piece is a FORM called Rotourne
it's NOT a strict adherence to the form though becuz I always
have a tendency yo at least 'bend' some rules lol
appreciate you sweetie pie! :)
It is indeed clarity, the piece is a FORM called Rotourne
it's NOT a strict adherence to the form though becuz I always
have a tendency yo at least 'bend' some rules lol
appreciate you sweetie pie! :)
17th Jun 2013 11:39pm
While the ocean tosses, then regurgitates despair
A steadied ship ventures outwardly without fear
Seeing clearly once clouded eyes 'regains sight' of road
Strength returns to roost, relinquishing bartered possessions for a soul…
Me, me, me, me! excellent!
Red
A steadied ship ventures outwardly without fear
Seeing clearly once clouded eyes 'regains sight' of road
Strength returns to roost, relinquishing bartered possessions for a soul…
Me, me, me, me! excellent!
Red
17th Jun 2013 11:50pm
Aaaaawwww sweetheart... I'm so honored! Thank u, c'mere... Mmmmuuuaaahhh! lol
Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 10:15am
regaining the vision-foresight replacing hindsight-just awesome, :-)
18th Jun 2013 2:44pm
gosh you're a brilliant lil lady... u nailed it :) thank you my dear...i appreciate you much! :)
