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Climax~
As your tongue slides up
my slippery furrow I
cradle you in between my
thighs
You love it when I hold you
extra tight while holding
your head
Locked in my succulent
passion you wouldn't
want to be anywhere
else
Soft moans escape your
mouth as I squirm all
over
My blonde hair framing
my beautiful face I feel
like I can stop
breathing
You probe deeper into
me with tipsy tongue
I give into your
pleasure
You're drunk on my
flavorful liquor your
excitement is
harder
Now give me your
throbbing cock make
me climax again
this time
with you
my slippery furrow I
cradle you in between my
thighs
You love it when I hold you
extra tight while holding
your head
Locked in my succulent
passion you wouldn't
want to be anywhere
else
Soft moans escape your
mouth as I squirm all
over
My blonde hair framing
my beautiful face I feel
like I can stop
breathing
You probe deeper into
me with tipsy tongue
I give into your
pleasure
You're drunk on my
flavorful liquor your
excitement is
harder
Now give me your
throbbing cock make
me climax again
this time
with you
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Re: Climax~
Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 11:02pm
tommie,
Wow! Now that's getting right down to the nub of the matter! Color me "drunk on your flavorful liquor" ; )
tornado
Wow! Now that's getting right down to the nub of the matter! Color me "drunk on your flavorful liquor" ; )
tornado
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17th Jun 2013 11:19pm
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17th Jun 2013 11:22pm
OMFG!!! Wowzers, who's the lucky !:$@&?!!#%! lol
Damn Tommie this was thirst inducing!! lol
Damn Tommie this was thirst inducing!! lol
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17th Jun 2013 11:27pm
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17th Jun 2013 11:36pm
Oh baby...there's no place like home...right on hawkdude! ;)
Thank you... ;-)
Thank you... ;-)
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18th Jun 2013 00:33am
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 1:11am
Thrilling piece...flavored liquor...pretty delicious line
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18th Jun 2013 1:26am
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18th Jun 2013 2:28am
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18th Jun 2013 3:35am
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18th Jun 2013 4:06am
Ha ha...I don't smoke either but could have after this one!
Thank you BiGS :)
Thank you BiGS :)
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 3:43am
Some write tl!
strider...
strider...
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18th Jun 2013 4:07am
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 4:20am
Wow that is hot! Making me a little hungry actually
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18th Jun 2013 4:31am
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18th Jun 2013 1:13pm
Wow, what a way to start my day! Well actually doing that would be the best way to start the day, but reading this was right there with it lol. Great job on the rhythm.
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18th Jun 2013 3:01pm
This would be a great wake up call.... ;) .....ha ha, glad you liked it!
Thanks for reading Ready4Anything27 ;)
Thanks for reading Ready4Anything27 ;)
Re: Climax~
Favourite line:
Locked into my succulent passion
You wouldn't want to be anywhere else.
Love "The blonde hair framing my beautiful face", reminding reader the woman does have a face (some poems describing sex at that point miss that). If there's any thing I would suggest adding to the poem, some description of what the experience does on the blonde hair-framed face would hold the reader.
Locked into my succulent passion
You wouldn't want to be anywhere else.
Love "The blonde hair framing my beautiful face", reminding reader the woman does have a face (some poems describing sex at that point miss that). If there's any thing I would suggest adding to the poem, some description of what the experience does on the blonde hair-framed face would hold the reader.
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18th Jun 2013 10:03pm
Anonymous
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Re: Climax~
17th Dec 2013 9:25pm
Locked in my succulent
passion you wouldn't
want to be anywhere
else ...............................
seeing your vagina wet
one can i bet
drown in your liquor alone
and
leave his bone
inside urs for ever
for you to own
ur imagination is rife
your words make me suffer
with a desire
to cumm
long distance
ur good lynne too good to be true
passion you wouldn't
want to be anywhere
else ...............................
seeing your vagina wet
one can i bet
drown in your liquor alone
and
leave his bone
inside urs for ever
for you to own
ur imagination is rife
your words make me suffer
with a desire
to cumm
long distance
ur good lynne too good to be true
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