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And You
Cool dawn mist
Engulfs
A half waking
Dream, feeling
Lips
Caressing
Hands
On bare hips
Searches
Finds
Warm lips
A melting together
A union
In unison scream
Silently
Bursting like fireworks
Over the mountain
Fountains
Shivering entwined
Closed eyes
And You.
Engulfs
A half waking
Dream, feeling
Lips
Caressing
Hands
On bare hips
Searches
Finds
Warm lips
A melting together
A union
In unison scream
Silently
Bursting like fireworks
Over the mountain
Fountains
Shivering entwined
Closed eyes
And You.
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15th Jun 2013 7:02am
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15th Jun 2013 7:22am
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 11:40am
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15th Jun 2013 1:23pm
Re: And You
15th Jun 2013 1:32pm
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15th Jun 2013 3:27pm
Re: And You
15th Jun 2013 7:27pm
Ahhhh such Beautiful Moments Dear Grace!!!
I do believe that Pen is smoking!!!
I do believe that Pen is smoking!!!
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16th Jun 2013 12:28pm
Re: And You
Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 00:01am
Hi Grace
This is different from your usual poetic
presentation and it works well.
Nice work
Hugs
Kitty
This is different from your usual poetic
presentation and it works well.
Nice work
Hugs
Kitty
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re: Re: And You
16th Jun 2013 12:28pm
Dear Kitty, thank you so much for noticing, yes I am trying something new. Hugs!
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 8:21am
Felt the deep passion in this-great work, Grace! :-)
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 11:34am
Very lovely grace...good luck
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16th Jun 2013 6:53pm
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17th Jun 2013 1:31am
Re: And You
17th Jun 2013 5:16pm
And you...I like this one Grace,especially the way it ended. Thanks for sharing
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17th Jun 2013 6:24pm