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Surrender me
surrender me then...
unto pocket
loving one
tussled enwrapped
our gaze
point and path
hands
wrap then grasp
welding arcs
my lovers breath
gasps
fleshing the feel glow
passion
pooling
parting rose
as ivory slips
curtains blow
the
clutching kiss
while moans
made of gold
intense
with our hips
sounding skied
heights
pulsing
waves
pound
and break
laid upon the beach
as we gaze deep
reaching
Everest
high peaks
mounted and adoring
the art
of our climb
the Hearts
of the brave
the calling
our rhyme
unto pocket
loving one
tussled enwrapped
our gaze
point and path
hands
wrap then grasp
welding arcs
my lovers breath
gasps
fleshing the feel glow
passion
pooling
parting rose
as ivory slips
curtains blow
the
clutching kiss
while moans
made of gold
intense
with our hips
sounding skied
heights
pulsing
waves
pound
and break
laid upon the beach
as we gaze deep
reaching
Everest
high peaks
mounted and adoring
the art
of our climb
the Hearts
of the brave
the calling
our rhyme
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15th Jun 2013 1:50am
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15th Jun 2013 1:52am
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15th Jun 2013 4:41am
Thank You for stopping by Gabriel-and for such kind words!!!
(that pic stopped me:) love shadow-play
(that pic stopped me:) love shadow-play
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 2:00am
Don't care about the comp. This one is a winner by any standard. You wrote some powerful images, love.
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 4:21am
Lovely soul....good luck!
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15th Jun 2013 7:56pm
Soul you have so much heart and it pours onto the paper great inking!!! peace Crim :)
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 8:29am
love the word choices and metered flow-gives it that swirling feel-dreamy! Much enjoyed.
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