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Shall we dance?
It's all a game, avoiding failure
come closing in for a kill
All in the name of misbehavior
flew too close to the sun
The fall, somehow defines us
those that claw inch by inch
Desire, longing to again fly
free, grounded though
I hope to never again fall
don't walk away, the heart yearning
Can you see through the pain?
It's after all, just tears in rain
I'm thirsty for your love
remember how thin a reprieve usually is
Without love the heart, surely will rust
Come take my hand, a leap of faith
dance with me, underneath the stars of lust
come closing in for a kill
All in the name of misbehavior
flew too close to the sun
The fall, somehow defines us
those that claw inch by inch
Desire, longing to again fly
free, grounded though
I hope to never again fall
don't walk away, the heart yearning
Can you see through the pain?
It's after all, just tears in rain
I'm thirsty for your love
remember how thin a reprieve usually is
Without love the heart, surely will rust
Come take my hand, a leap of faith
dance with me, underneath the stars of lust
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Re: Shall we dance?
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 10:21am
Well done write noctem...strider
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14th Jun 2013 11:29am
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14th Jun 2013 8:20pm
Re: Shall we dance?
14th Jun 2013 11:39am
The dance of life, yes. Sometimes its a long slow loving dance, sometimes its a fiery burst... But its a dance. Good read, carpe.
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14th Jun 2013 8:34pm
Re: Shall we dance?
14th Jun 2013 11:39am
Beautiful write
Without love the heart, surely will rust
Come take my hand, a leap of faith
dance with me, underneath the stars of lust = favorite lines
I love it
Without love the heart, surely will rust
Come take my hand, a leap of faith
dance with me, underneath the stars of lust = favorite lines
I love it
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14th Jun 2013 8:42pm
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14th Jun 2013 12:11pm
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14th Jun 2013 4:11pm
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Re: Shall we dance?
15th Jun 2013 4:40am
this is so beautiful Carpe. I love it would add it to my list but i'm only allowed 183 and I have 196. great inking my friend. peace Crim :)
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15th Jun 2013 7:11am
Re: Shall we dance?
Anonymous
16th Jun 2013 8:33am
just tears in rain..reminds me of Dylan's line "crying like a fire in the sun"
I like how many different emotions come through in this-a weave for sure..beautiful work
I like how many different emotions come through in this-a weave for sure..beautiful work
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16th Jun 2013 11:39am